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Maverick Wolf
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0 posted 2002-03-23 08:34 PM


When is enough
Enough?
When can I call it quits?

One more day?
One more minute?
One more instant?

What will be the end?
When shall it be?
Can I quit?

You or I
I am weak
Too weak to quit?

[This message has been edited by Maverick Wolf (03-23-2002 08:50 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-23 08:48 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is sooooo emotionally powerful, sweet friend, stay strong, for as long as you stay true to what you feel and believe your weak heart will heal and glow with rich love again! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-23 08:51 PM


You are obviously talking about a sick dog or cat in your family that you detest and do not wish to have living anymore. But it is clear that you are morally torn between putting the cat to sleep or just letting it writhe in agony. Deep moral questioning, it is a shame our school systems do not equip you with moral theory education, so you must be torn. Very deep, long thoughtout, piece by piece edited piece!

"Why should I live? Why should I do anything? Is there in life any purpose which the inevitable death that awaits me does not undo and destroy?" -Tols

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