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Like My First Day on Earth
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Like My First Day on Earth |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
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 a crazy laughter building inside mirth, unbridled with high resolution clay-child, with naïve knowledge he knows only what he knows and knows not of the unknown This, the advantage of the newly love-born so different, like a second life when our love spawned a new chance the world much brighter, vibrant wildfire hope and kindness christens a union I do not know myself any longer this stranger in a poppy field of exhilaration your smile is my birth-mother surrounding me with precious adulation each day in your adoring arms, my love, is Like My First Day on Earth ~~~~~~ ( ~ For my special friend on a spiritual birthing day ~ ) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just know your friend is going to love this sooooo much! (big hugggssssss) I too always feel when I dream of my love or my closest friends that my real life has just begun and I have been reincarnated in true joy! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet jeff, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
~~heart sighs~~ Thank you baby, this was so beautiful  [This message has been edited by Dulcinea (03-23-2002 10:54 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful tribute to the one you love, Jeff. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautiful thoughts Jeff..as always...hugs nicely done ~Victoria~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jeff darling boy oh my stars this is utterly utterly one of your best ever. This flows like liquid honey, sweet and as smooth as silk. Truly awesome writing. Rarely is writing this good, but this is truly outstandingly lovely. I love it utterly I always enjoy your writing and this is just sooooooo wonderful. Such beauty is amazing to see you’ve brought tears of delight to my eyes. Wonderful Utterly wonderful, a fabulous tribute to your special friend, good writing darling boy very well written    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
so different, like a second life when our love spawned a new chance the world much brighter, vibrant wildfire hope and kindness christens a union I liked those lines alot. You are lucky to have a second chance, and that in itself is worth celebrating. Like Dulci said though, how does one write of a heart sighing~ |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
noah, the dearest lie under quiet quilts stripped of ancient thieves of guilt they lie naked as new born child as reborn, am i, in a rapture beguiled Many thanks, Noah, for noticing caring and sharing part of you, Jeff Dulcy, without the most wonderful inspiration in my life, myself, the poetry, my life, would be nothing more than tears that couldn't dry. You're welcome, Hon, in more ways than one! Madame Lady Munk-Ster: Awww t'anx Lady! Ok, so I am lucky, and don't I know it! *smiles |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Vic: ~Sunday hugs~ for your kindness, friendship, and your support. Cannot believe that you like me, even if I am green-skinned and come from Mars! Maaaaashaw: Hope I didn't make you cry too much. I try not post too much romantic stuff, unless the moment is called for. The double-birth seemed like a Holiday to me, and to her. All I can in thanks to you is: Gee Wish, my young buddy, you can sure make a guy blush! Lor: Love can sometimes be painful, in answer to your inquiry. Take the good with the not-so-good, I guess, but trust, respect in the other goes a long way in creating the relationship in its entirety. I am honored that you give me your blessing….means so much, Lor. You are the best kind of full-hearted Lady. ~sigh~ ~huuuuuuugg~ Jeff |
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