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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-03-23 08:01 AM

When summer is here,
all is settled except
the missing spring breeze.
When mild wind caresses my face,
I wonder why it hasn't set me free.

When snow coats all earth,
I think of lying on her sleeves
as my white pillow.
Yet she brings a strand of loneliness
that chills my heart.

When autumn leaves paint colors for me,
I feel beauty surrounds me.
But when I see the falling leaf,
the brown feather recalls my withering dreams,
and mirth of my past floating in mist.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-03-23 08:06 AM

aries_luv_ppl,
Enjoyed the read.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-03-23 08:19 AM

It does seem, Eliza, as if sometimes we were never content with the time and place, as if we are always missing something...enjoyed this!

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2002-03-23 09:48 AM

like love is good but too good for my stomach.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-03-23 10:54 AM

Very nice writing...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-23 12:45 PM

(sigh) This is a powerful poem of yearning for that something more through time, sweet friend, I love it! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elia, thank you for sharing!