Open Poetry #19 |
Autumn |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
The lonely widow, Autumn danced, remembering how it was, while eager winds with eager hands were tearing off her clothes And no one thought that this was strange, pretending nothing happened. The lonely Autumn cried in rage and puddles rippled, saddened. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Andrey, this is so sad but beautiful, you always create such fabulous visions with your words! (sigh) May Autumn's tears become the sunlight of spring and may Autumn wear the colors of beauty once more always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrey, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I suppose there is a distinct sadness associated with the autumn time. It is a time of death. In these few words you speak so much. God alone is alone. Man is not. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's nice seeing your work, Master! Thank you for this! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Master, yes it's sad to slip into Autumn. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Very nicely done. Enjoyed your poem muchly. |
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