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Cameo Dreams New Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 9 |
gentle smile carved ivory grace cheekbones high upon her face what lies behind is not what it seems can you find the cameo dreams? worn just for show her worth unclear growing golden with passing year handle carefully lest you feel her prick she’ll bleed you dry with just one stick waken her not to hear the screams nightmares plague her cameo dreams |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
cameo dreams, Ouch...coming out bold! Welcome to Passions. Hope you like it here as much as me. Sunshine will send you an unofficial surprise. However, she does it so much, by now, I think it is official. Excellent poem. Look forward to more.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* Welcome to Passions *~ I got wrapped up in memories by your first post, as this could apply to the male gender as well. I hope you will enjoy it here and this was a very strong post on your entrance. ~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i will wear this piece around my neck like a jewel on a silver chain.... lovely!!!! your writing here has the cameo of itself!! thank you for sharing! welcome to the blue pages |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I really enjoyed all the passion and energy in this. I look forward to reading more of your cameo dreams. Delightful first post and welcome!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Welcome to Passions! I absolutely love the last stanza. Just love it! Keep posting! Hopelessly in love |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
welcome, welcome, welcome.... wonderful entrance. ever deep...runs |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a very strong write for a first post into Passions! Welcome!! Please, check your e-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Quite a cameo appearance.....WELCOME! |
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Cameo Dreams New Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 9 |
Thank you for such a warm welcome. You make me feel at home. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome to Passions...enjoyed your words.. looking forward to reading more from you ~Victoria~
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed welcome to passions |
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Cameo Dreams New Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 9 |
Thank you. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
You’ve made a fantastic entrance with this one. Keep writing like this, and I’ll keep reading. A big welcome to you, here to the blue pages. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cameo Dreams, Welcome and I enjoyed the write. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Welcome to Passions, Kira, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. This was excellent. ~Tier |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS A FABULOUS FIRST POST, SWEET FRIEND, I LOVE IT!!! Your words strike with such emotion and sincerity, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kira, myay you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) We all love you somuch, sweet friend, I can't wait to read more wonderful poems from you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kira, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Welcome to our humble home! Get comfy and enjoy yourself |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What an enjoyable read this is. Well written, with excellent cameo imagery. Welcome to these blue pages. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Cadenced kissed and rhymes divine! Welcome to Poetry Land Cameo Dreams... so nice to have you here with us. Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
As I read this the image within the ivory became clearer and defined. The imagry you used worked well, right into the person wearing it. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Cameo...Beautiful entrance into Passions. Enjoyed this immensely. ***Ivy Rose |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wonderful first write...very strong. this left extremely vivid images in my mind. looking foward to reading more from you and your "cameo dreams". just purely excellent! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome Cameo. I am pretty new myself. This is a wonderful place with wonderful people and I hope you enjoy it as much as I have. This poem is very mystical. I especially like the brilliance of the idea of the cameo. I look forward to reading more of your work. ThisDiamond |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yep you'll definatly fit in around here I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me. |
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