Open Poetry #19 |
God Gave Us Each Other |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
God Gave Us Each Other By: Noah Eaton 3/23/02 I felt just like Chicken-Little I could have sworn the sky was falling The day we fell in love at first sight You're a song written by God Deep in your heart There's a timeless love That I will hold forever... You're my sweet soulmate You're my Aphrodite Your love is deja vu everyday You're my lifes honeybee And all the things that God made you Heavenly to me When you come to me I hold your hand as we carve our initials Upon our tree I kiss you softly on your moist lips And when the winds get cold When the winter dawns over I pray that we will always Love each other You're my sweet soulmate You're my Aphrodite Your love is deja vu everyday You're my lifes honeybee And all the things that God made you Heavenly to me Now I can see the northern lights in your eyes I can smell the heather of the summer rain You have seduced me, oh you've touched me baby God has delivered me to you like a boomerang Upon the marine waters we'll sail in the moonlight We'll walk heavens ceilings above the boondocks We don't need karma, we are free in each others embrace I am born again, I fall in love with you every day Whenever you laugh I can feel my heart quiver I think my knees are slowly melting And when you show your smile I feel myself falling In heaven Lost in your eyes... You're my sweet soulmate You're my Aphrodite Your love is deja vu everyday You're my lifes honeybee And all the things that God made you Heavenly to me You're my sweet soulmate You're my Aphrodite Your love is deja vu everyday You're my lifes honeybee And all the things that God made you Heavenly to me [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-23-2002 05:52 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love it noah dear..this is just beautiful..as always.. ~Victoria
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Cameo Dreams New Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 9 |
A beautiful declaration of love. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am loving the long songs you are singing Noah, very nice. ~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, I love the sky is falling reference, VERY non-cliche' ever deep...runs |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"Now I can see the northern lights in your eyes I can smell the heather of the summer rain" Noah this is another beautiful poem. floria Floria |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Hey remember me? What an absolutely gorgeous poem! Brings tears to my eyes-the person your writing for is the luckiest person in the world! I've missed reading these wonderful pieces! -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
As lovely a song as there ever was, Noah! Cor |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
noah, this gave me a chill as i read it, but the kind that leaves your heart stopping and your eyes wanting to read more...this was just so beautiful. your songs warm my heart and the girl you write them for is very lucky indeed. i wish you lots of love and happiness! take care sweetie. amy "you can't stop |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
With so tender a romantic heart, how could she resist loving you for eternity? Very beautiful Noah! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy Do you know how good this really is? Not just the form although that is excellent. I mean the construction the flow the internal rhythm this is utterly stunning. Perfectly penned darling boy absolutely perfect Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (03-23-2002 05:08 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Noah, this was so lovely, so romantic, so you! I have no idea who this was written for, but I hope the person loves you as much as you love them. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Noah...James |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Shes a lucky lady, So glad you found someone to share love and happiness. I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Back up ladies, this romantic gentleman is MINE! hahahhaa sweetie, this is so grogeous, everything about it speaks to me in volumes! Hugs, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice, Noah. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You're a song written by God Deep in your heart There's a timeless love That I will hold forever... gorgeous words, Noah.... copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
It is so good to see you happy and to see how love flows from your heart. May it always brighten your days. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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