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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-22 10:26 PM






God Gave Us Each Other
By: Noah Eaton
3/23/02

I felt just like Chicken-Little
I could have sworn the sky was falling
The day we fell in love at first sight
You're a song written by God
Deep in your heart
There's a timeless love
That I will hold forever...

You're my sweet soulmate
You're my Aphrodite
Your love is deja vu everyday
You're my lifes honeybee
And all the things that God made you
Heavenly to me

When you come to me
I hold your hand as we carve our initials
Upon our tree
I kiss you softly on your moist lips
And when the winds get cold
When the winter dawns over
I pray that we will always
Love each other

You're my sweet soulmate
You're my Aphrodite
Your love is deja vu everyday
You're my lifes honeybee
And all the things that God made you
Heavenly to me

Now I can see the northern lights in your eyes
I can smell the heather of the summer rain
You have seduced me, oh you've touched me baby
God has delivered me to you like a boomerang
Upon the marine waters we'll sail in the moonlight
We'll walk heavens ceilings above the boondocks
We don't need karma, we are free in each others embrace
I am born again, I fall in love with you every day

Whenever you laugh
I can feel my heart quiver
I think my knees are slowly melting
And when you show your smile
I feel myself falling
In heaven
Lost in your eyes...

You're my sweet soulmate
You're my Aphrodite
Your love is deja vu everyday
You're my lifes honeybee
And all the things that God made you
Heavenly to me
You're my sweet soulmate
You're my Aphrodite
Your love is deja vu everyday
You're my lifes honeybee
And all the things that God made you
Heavenly to me


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-23-2002 05:52 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-22 10:28 PM


I love it noah dear..this is just beautiful..as always..

              ~Victoria


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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2 posted 2002-03-23 01:26 AM


A beautiful declaration of love.
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3 posted 2002-03-23 01:27 AM


I am loving the long songs you are singing Noah, very nice.

~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~
Albert Einstein

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4 posted 2002-03-23 05:44 AM


Noah,

I love the sky is falling reference, VERY non-cliche'

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

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5 posted 2002-03-23 09:19 AM


"Now I can see the northern lights in your eyes
I can smell the heather of the summer rain"
Noah this is another beautiful poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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6 posted 2002-03-23 04:15 PM


Hey remember me?   What an absolutely gorgeous poem!  Brings tears to my eyes-the person your writing for is the luckiest person in the world!  I've missed reading these wonderful pieces!
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

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7 posted 2002-03-23 04:39 PM


As lovely a song as there ever was,
Noah!

Cor

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8 posted 2002-03-23 04:43 PM


noah,

this gave me a chill as i read it, but the kind that leaves your heart stopping
and your eyes wanting to read more...this was just so beautiful. your songs
warm my heart and the girl you write them for is very lucky indeed. i wish
you lots of love and happiness! take care sweetie.

amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

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9 posted 2002-03-23 04:50 PM


With so tender a romantic heart, how could she resist loving you for eternity? Very beautiful Noah!
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10 posted 2002-03-23 05:07 PM


Noah darling boy Do you know how good this really is? Not just the form although that is excellent. I mean the construction the flow the internal rhythm this is utterly stunning.

Perfectly penned darling boy absolutely perfect

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy




To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (03-23-2002 05:08 PM).]

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11 posted 2002-03-23 07:52 PM


Oh Noah, this was so lovely, so romantic, so you! I have no idea who this was written for, but I hope the person loves you as much as you love them.
Hugs, Marti

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12 posted 2002-03-23 09:39 PM


Very nice Noah...James
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13 posted 2002-03-23 09:46 PM


Shes a lucky lady, So glad you found someone to share love and happiness.

I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me.


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14 posted 2002-03-24 03:53 PM


Back up ladies, this romantic gentleman is MINE! hahahhaa sweetie, this is so grogeous, everything about it speaks to me in volumes!

Hugs,


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15 posted 2002-03-24 04:22 PM


enjoyed
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16 posted 2002-03-24 05:43 PM


Very nice, Noah.
Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-03-24 10:33 PM


You're a song written by God
Deep in your heart
There's a timeless love
That I will hold forever...

gorgeous words, Noah....

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Charisma
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18 posted 2002-03-28 09:52 AM


It is so good to see  you happy and to see how love flows from your heart.
May it always brighten your days.

((hugs))
Charisma

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