Open Poetry #19 |
- Mate Of The Soul - |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Mate Of The Soul We've never met and yet, I know your heart, the length, the depth and the heighth of it; For, I know that you exist as sure as I taste my own breath. You are the mate my soul has reached for in search of beautiful bond in all it's strong fragility. You are my deja vu of one heart and spirit through past, present and future kisses kindled in bask of destiny fulfilled. We are earth and universe soaring as eagles in sweet exhale through the wind's fingers into the arms of sacred dance. You'll hear the sound of laughter echo through my heart in beat with whispers of love woven in the tapestry of us. In mesh I wear your flesh of kismet gown profound, a familiar unknown through the mapping of your soul. Your smile spreads it's spill of quill upon my pages of skin, you write of simplicities and intricacies that's in perfect rhyme with mine. I drink of your ink in cadence of friend and kindred into a sigh's vastness of love's meter and flow. Reason never questions why and karma does not explain, for, this is God's plan it's not in our hands. Yes, this is where we belong falling into each other's eyes bathed in spring blossom so that the icy touch of winter shall never frost our union. You are my cup of life in which I sip of a hundred vows before where you and I sailed across the sea of amore through passion overfloweth into the cream of dreams come true. By Melissa P. Monette True love knows not of race or time it is a choice of fate divine Melissa P. Monette Love is poetry of the heart it is destiny's work of art Melissa P. Monette |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I love both your gorgeous poem and your gorgeous signatures of love, sweet friend, you truly are the honeybee of romance and passion of these pages! (kiss on cheek) May your hearts forever rest in Gods Hands and may your forever melt happily in eternal love with your soulmate, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I been telling you that for months. Melissa!! Thank goodness for finally agreeing with me!! LOL! Well, even if it's not for me, the lines are wonderful and it is an excellent poem...you have style, my girl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Melybee, one of your finer works, I do believe...this just rolled off my tongue and I do like reading it aloud, but in a hushed voice...this one is meant for two...shhhh....I hear them whispering now... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Not just words, but heart, my friend...bowing here... jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am envious and jealous!! This is awesome!! Way to go!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
said Melissa, "I hope you like it?" Well, do bears go in the bush? LOL, beautiful, in a romantic sort of way it outshines them all, but you always do, don't you? ~* Women have got to make the world safe for men since men have made it so darned unsafe for women *~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Melissa this is a true song to your Twin Flame. A wonderful write. Parker |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Melissa, this is so very lovely. Your expression was quite simply marvelous. Beautiful thoughts on the subject of love and all that it entails. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ah, Sweet Melissa, One day your prince will come, won't that be sweet? Great write! Peace, Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In mesh I wear your flesh of kismet gown profound, a familiar unknown through the mapping of your soul. Your smile spreads it's spill of quill upon my pages of skin, you write of simplicities and intricacies that's in perfect rhyme with mine. I drink of your ink in cadence of friend and kindred into a sigh's vastness of love's meter and flow. =================================== "In mesh I wear your flesh of kismet gown profound," *smiling at you* could that line be any cooler? Youve got some awesome word play, analogy and turn of phrase in this Melis... your soulmate is soulfood for your pen... your soulmate series are among your best. Beautiful write girlie...as long as we believe...the rest just will be. heart-hugs mothy me Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Melissa this is so beautiful I just wanted to hilight the entire poem and of course the pictures added to this wonderful piece. floria Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is so lovely Melissa..i always enjoy your words..beautifully written ~Victoria~
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Melissa...Powerful, Masterful, portrait of a soulmate. Your writing has wings, soars!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I am stunned to silence, in awe of such loving beauty displayed upon this page... ~Breathlessly spoken, though loudly heard~ |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, wow, this is amazing! I love it when you're in a mushy mood, your muse always brings out the beauty of your heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Melissa, Melissa, |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Melissa, these are some powerful emotions you've penned here. Beautiful work! sky |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa, I love this, and the beautful pictures go so well with it. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you all so much! This poem actually means a lot to me, and, I also feel that it is one of my best, although there's always room for improvement. I'm just a hopeless romantic and for some reason I seem to be obsessed with lovey dovey things this week Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I’m sighing here. This is such a gorgeous piece Melissa. You’ve described a soul mate with such beauty and depth of heart. Just lovely. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Melissa, All I can say...Is SO incredibly beautiful.... You speak from the heart of what so many of us feel, and believe. We all search for that love, that passion,that soulmate, and your words make it seem a little closer to coming true. You have a true gift, and your writing affects me more than I can say... Love, Elise |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
An utterly fabulous expression, excellent! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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