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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-03-22 02:38 PM

Tell me Times Three

Some think
my memory is faulty
‘tis why I let them
have their fun,

for I recall the way you took my
heart by your
smile

offering loving~word~linked~to~loving~word
and once was enough
to believe

so when in drunken
reverie some One told you what you
wanted~to~hear

when turning was still an option

to arms that meant evermore

you only listened once…

so if I learned from life’s lessons
to selectively hear
what one chooses to voice, don’t mind me
if I ask my new “you” to repeat

twice, thrice

why I should be loved…

for I cannot ever fall for the
first time’s lines,
again…

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

1 posted 2002-03-22 03:02 PM

Yes, it's nice to hear it more than once. Enjoyed this.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-03-22 03:09 PM

I like this write very much.... funny how lifes little pains cause us to hear and see things differently...

Connie

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-03-22 03:54 PM

Oh wow. That totally touched me. Wow. Thanks for that awesome read!

Zu is my hero

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-03-22 05:09 PM

Soleil Noir,
Interesting write, enjoyed.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2002-03-22 05:28 PM

Enjoyed the way you handled this...jwesley

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

6 posted 2002-03-22 06:19 PM

I`m reading your words times three, enjoyed more each time. Thank you for the sharing of them.

Pell

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-03-22 08:22 PM

(sigh) Wow, this is sooooooo emotionally powerful, sweet friend, I too agree with you, for I feel we should all be reminded of how much one loves another so we know if ntheir love is real always! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-03-22 08:31 PM

Very well done, Soliel...and also very true.
I think that at some level...we all hear what we want to hear.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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