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TriXter
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The One

0 posted 2002-03-22 01:06 PM


I often see you there, in the bright sun of life
Soaking up what u can, away from the rain,
As I watch, all I’ve ever known if this feeling called pain.
When a moment approaches that I may talk, laugh, Dance with thee
Another knight comes, and takes u from me.

My heart overcome with mixed emotions,
Pain, hate, fear, jealousy, there all here
As I stand back and watch u smile, I can’t stop but shed a tear.
You’re smile can bright up the darkest room,
When u smile, everyone’s face lights with glee,
But my heart starts to die because I know, one will never be for me.

I die more each day just wanting to breathe the same air as you,
It’s my dream, but like most of its kind, it will never come true.
You could be my someone, you could be with me
Will I ever get over these shackles that entangle me,
This shyness that stops me from doing so much.
Jenn, this we will see.

© Copyright 2002 TriXter - All Rights Reserved
PoetriPrincess
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1 posted 2002-03-22 01:25 PM


Nice sentiment in this.

[This message has been edited by PoetriPrincess (03-22-2002 01:26 PM).]

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-03-22 02:05 PM



Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

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3 posted 2002-03-22 02:31 PM


Welcome to poetry land TriXter! I like that name a lot! I hope you will enjoy it here as much as I do.
Zinsser
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Calif.
4 posted 2002-03-22 03:16 PM


beautiful.... enjoyed
Connie

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5 posted 2002-03-22 07:15 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh my gosh, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope Jenn can feel how you feel and she will become in reach of you asnd fill you with joy! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a marvelous first post, I can't wait to read much more from you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Gaia
6 posted 2002-03-22 09:01 PM


It can be really tough when you're always enjoying the view from a distance, not up close. Hang in there. What will be, will be. Welcome to Pips blue pages.  
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7 posted 2002-03-23 09:56 AM


Welcome to Passions hope you enjoy writing with us.

             ~Victoria~


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



vandana
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8 posted 2002-03-23 10:07 AM


welcome to passions enjoy your read look forward to read more
Tracey
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9 posted 2002-03-23 11:03 AM


Great emotion spills forth from your pen with this. The agony of unrequited love. Welcome to the blue pages.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Aimster
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10 posted 2002-03-23 09:49 PM


i really felt this friend. i hope
that jenn realises your feelings for her
and returns them soon...as for shyness, i
think we all are that way from time to
time. but sometimes you just got to take
the risk...love is ALWAYS worth it!

take care. looking forward to reading
more from you.

amy  

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

[This message has been edited by Aimster (03-23-2002 09:50 PM).]

Moon Dust
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11 posted 2002-03-23 10:01 PM


hey if you try you will, but I like this it has a little bit of hope

I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me.


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