Open Poetry #19 |
Out Of Reach |
TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
I often see you there, in the bright sun of life Soaking up what u can, away from the rain, As I watch, all I’ve ever known if this feeling called pain. When a moment approaches that I may talk, laugh, Dance with thee Another knight comes, and takes u from me. My heart overcome with mixed emotions, Pain, hate, fear, jealousy, there all here As I stand back and watch u smile, I can’t stop but shed a tear. You’re smile can bright up the darkest room, When u smile, everyone’s face lights with glee, But my heart starts to die because I know, one will never be for me. I die more each day just wanting to breathe the same air as you, It’s my dream, but like most of its kind, it will never come true. You could be my someone, you could be with me Will I ever get over these shackles that entangle me, This shyness that stops me from doing so much. Jenn, this we will see. |
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PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
Nice sentiment in this. [This message has been edited by PoetriPrincess (03-22-2002 01:26 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Welcome to poetry land TriXter! I like that name a lot! I hope you will enjoy it here as much as I do. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful.... enjoyed Connie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh my gosh, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope Jenn can feel how you feel and she will become in reach of you asnd fill you with joy! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a marvelous first post, I can't wait to read much more from you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It can be really tough when you're always enjoying the view from a distance, not up close. Hang in there. What will be, will be. Welcome to Pips blue pages. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome to Passions hope you enjoy writing with us. ~Victoria~
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoy your read look forward to read more |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Great emotion spills forth from your pen with this. The agony of unrequited love. Welcome to the blue pages. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
i really felt this friend. i hope that jenn realises your feelings for her and returns them soon...as for shyness, i think we all are that way from time to time. but sometimes you just got to take the risk...love is ALWAYS worth it! take care. looking forward to reading more from you. amy "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do [This message has been edited by Aimster (03-23-2002 09:50 PM).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
hey if you try you will, but I like this it has a little bit of hope I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me. |
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