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Aching Without You
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Aching Without You |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Aching Without You AMK 3/22/02 I miss you so much Seems I'm going to lose my mind Your memory lingers with me in all I do If I had one wish, it would be to make time rewind I look around at this apartment Feeling you in every room there is Even though I hear your voice on the phone It can't replace the magic of your kiss I know that you miss me just the same That this longing is something we must for now bear Just please know my sweet darling That I love you and will always care I close my eyes for a moment Your face is right before me I cherish everything about you from your smile to your heart Praying that our love lasts for eternity I've never known a person like you One that completes my heart and soul By your side I will be soon my love Then once again I'll feel whole I miss you, aching with my need Blinking back the tears, that I know I should cry Thinking back to that fateful day when you left Even though it wasn't a "true" good-bye My heart breaks without you here with me Still I hang on as each day passes into the next one As I wish upon a star That soon our lives will have begun "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do [This message has been edited by Aimster (03-22-2002 11:39 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart oh this is sooooooo good. Truly outstanding, as always, you are such a fine poet. I love the way you’ve written this, it’s utterly superb, the flow is divine all the way through. This really is an excellent piece darling girl you have excelled yourself. The longing and the yearning reaches out from the page, you have written this sooooooo very well Wonderful writing utterly wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
there is always the storm that leads to the calm. . . fear not, and be strong. . . for soon, every storm ends. . .and the sun shines brightly. . . well done my friend. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Waiting to begin your life, how sad. Perhaps it won't be too long. Nan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster, Every end has a new beginning. Enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your tears and I pray with all my heart that soon your heart will again be touched by his gentle sunshine and love will forever bring a smile to your face! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Amy, You do this so well It's so sweet, I enjoyed.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aw, that's so sad! I don't know what to say... Good write though! You'll get through it. *hugs* Zu is my hero |
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