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Decaflame
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0 posted 2002-03-22 09:39 AM



Magnus

Believing he twisted two
names,
becoming one

fine bottled wine by way
of sorcery

Magnum meets Magus

I sink into the depths
of his inkwell
dipping in black thoughts
that meet sunlight’s call

contented smiles
lifted easily by his quill

light the candle’s wick, Sire,
and write one more
for all


© Copyright 2002 Decaflame - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2002-03-22 09:42 AM


This is great! I agree, his writing is so enjoyed,and so is yours.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-03-22 10:05 AM


nicely done...and I think you captured well the essence...


Martie
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3 posted 2002-03-22 10:09 AM


Portraits by Decaflame...with clear vision and a bit of wisdom's eye.
Magnus
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4 posted 2002-03-22 01:04 PM


Into the light of candle's flames
A knight rides of two blended names
To pen the words from quill and pen
of dragons, maids and fighting men.

I shall write the words of desire
born of heart, soul and hottest fire
A flame shall light page's black ink
with penned words of that which I think.

Thank You Decaflame...I have never had any
poet write a poem about me...somewhat
mysterious, but also very pleasing...

Thank You!!

PoetriPrincess
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5 posted 2002-03-22 01:56 PM


An enjoyable read!

A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
  ~ Abraham Maslo

Zinsser
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6 posted 2002-03-22 03:41 PM


Decaflame.... what a wonderfull write, what an honor it must be for whom you write about
~~ Connie~~

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7 posted 2002-03-22 07:27 PM




WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I agree, Barry is a wonderful friend and poet and his well is always filled with infinite enchantment! (smiles) This is a wonderful tribute to a wonderful person, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

walker
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8 posted 2002-03-22 07:42 PM


Great poem about a great writer
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