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mauddib
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0 posted 2002-03-22 08:35 AM


Remember,
just for awhile
your days,
of childhood intrigue.
With all their hunger and their greed
for the days to hasten.

Remember the fascination,
the congratulation you gave yourself,
When first you wrote your name.
Life was just a game,
and won't somebody show me the rules again.

Remember all the romance that we shared.
You know we really didn't have a care.
It was something special
that belongs to only you.
But now we talk too little,
We laugh too little,
We've lost a little a shame,
When that passions been tamed.
I turn to look,
but find that there's nobody else to blame.

There was a promise left behind.
It's like litter in the back of your mind.
But you're the only one who is left
in disguise.
Age is just a enemy
and experience the jealousy of life.
Well come on now
you sure know how to survive.

What does it take to understand
the child inside the man?



© Copyright 2002 greg connors - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-03-22 08:48 AM


mauddib,
Good question, enjoyed the write.

Victoria
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2 posted 2002-03-23 10:15 AM


We all have that child within us..dont we? Nice to read your words again

                ~Victoria~


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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3 posted 2002-03-23 12:31 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is so very tue, sweet friend, I wish so many who take their innocence for granted as they grow up can understand how the child inside of them is sooooo important beacuase dreams is what makes our lives special and it breaks my heart to see many forsake them! (sad sigh) This is sooooooo powerfully expressed, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Greg, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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