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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-03-21 12:31 PM


Dedicated to all
passionate
truth seekers.


In my dreams I want to climb
the highest mountains with you.
Maybe Machu Pichu,
Denali (Mc Kinley) or Everest?
Even Mount Masada in Israel
might do.
Somewhere above the clouds
would suit us well,
somewhere to search for
our own Holy Grail.
Along a path with our names engraved
and not atop some other’s enslaved
memories of freedom or fairness.
What would we find
at the end of our climb?
Would we see each other’s aura?
Would we read each other’s mind?
If I could, I would climb
the highest mountains,
with you.



I also wrote about climbing Mount Masada(prose) /pip/Forum15/HTML/001341.html

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-21-2002 12:54 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-21 12:33 PM


I'll meet you up there midnight, well in my dreams anyway. This is so so nice, I truly enjoyed the sentiment in this. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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2 posted 2002-03-21 12:40 PM


Thank you, Floria. It would be a very interesting climb, and I'd love your company.
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3 posted 2002-03-21 12:43 PM


"What would we find
at the end of our climb?
Would we see each other’s aura?
Would we read each other’s mind?
If I could, I would climb
the highest mountains,
with you"



I wish I wrote this part...
I enjoyed this very much

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4 posted 2002-03-21 12:47 PM


Midnitesun,
A very nice write and I enjoyed the read.

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5 posted 2002-03-21 12:51 PM


SEA, thanks! That's a great big hug of a complement.
Sy, thank you. FYI, I finally wrote about climbing Mount Masada. It's in the prose section.

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6 posted 2002-03-21 08:12 PM


I can barely climb over my own two feet these days. But this was a great write.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-03-21 08:22 PM




WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a beautifully delightful poem, sweet friend, I too love to seek truth, though also I think it is just a wondeful thought trying to think up the answers through intuition too! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-03-21 09:00 PM


Sandra, LOL at your reply. Ah, put those hiking boots on, girl, and let's just go for it! If you think about it too long you'll find ten reasons not to do it. DO IT...NOW. Carpe diem....or was that crappe diem? or carpal tunnel?

Noah, get your hiking boots dusted off, I'll be in Colorado this summer. Better be ready for the real thing. I can still hike, even if I have to stop every ten minutes to 'breathe' in the fresh air.

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