Open Poetry #19 |
Falling |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I trip frequently over shattered hopes and misplaced dreams. I fall consistently over sharp edged words and convoluted thoughts. His mistep should not have been a problem Yet here I am on the ground again lying in a puddle of unfinished business. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh....this is fantastic...I relate. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this is great sandra..a different style for you..enjoyed ~Victoria~
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Catalina, can I tell you how much I like this?? Wow, I LOVE IT. floria Floria |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the way you use language in this. A GREAT poem. Nan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra!! This is incredible!! WOW!! Hugs to you! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, A worthy piece of writing. Excellent. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
falling. . . or fallen?? the thoughts fly from this one Sandra. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nice writing, Sandra. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sandra~ I know exactly how this feels, I fall everyday...HUGSSS to you.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-21-2002 04:49 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Never trust a man. Make 'em always do it your way. You got the tools to keep him in line. And the wisdom. Let him do the dreaming and hoping. Hehe.. Always stay in control. ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, I always love reading your wonderful words, I hope soon you find all ther joy your heart desires and this unfinished errands of your heart will be completed! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
No doubht you were writing from the heart. Good write! My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very clever! I loved this one! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this style from you...and like the way this one sat on my lips this morn.. nice work Sandra... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A powerful & rather sad write..... Wonderful.... I wonder how r u doing...I missed u Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn, I like this, Sandra! |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Great metaphors! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yep, sometimes feels like we’re all thumbs and left feet huh? I like this, you get your feelings out in so few words here. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, I remember times like this...just couldn't describe them, until now! And sadly I have been the cause of times like this. But age has helped me do it much less often. One more thing, it breaks my heart to see people have to deal with these issues. Peace... Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Shattered hopes and misplaced dreams are painful indeed, but eventually we must pick up the pieces and try to put them back together again so that all is not lost completely. Loved this Sandra~ |
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