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The Window Of My Heart
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The Window Of My Heart |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859
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The Window Of My Heart The window of my heart, is open wide for you. Just look inside and you will see my love for you is true. I do not draw the blinds, nor close the window tight. I keep it open all day long, and even in the night. If rain should come my way, I mind not drops that fall. I do not close my window, I close it not at all. And when soft breezes blow, It does not worry me The gentle winds that swirl around, they hum loves melody. The window of my heart, I keep it open wide. Perhaps one day you'll come along, and stop to look inside. And enter at the door, to bring a sweet bouquet. Perhaps you'll even stay. Perhaps you'll even stay. Floria Kelderhouse © 2002 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
As I look into your open window I am drawn to you by radiant light As your softness and beauty are aglow Lighting every darkess by your sight. Into your open your heart I quickly run Seeking wonderful peace and joy, I see For ev'ry pretty smile, warm feeling there I relish as God's gift from thee to me. Thank you floria. Your poem is very, very beautiful.  ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love every word!!!! *sigh* this is fantastic!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* absolutely beautiful...I am glad you let me take a look inside the window of your heart...I know someday he will come along and not be able to just stop and look....**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the love of your life forever come to your window and serenade you with songs of love forever in the moonlight of eternity! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Floria - Truly a great write. I really liked how you repeated the last line. It made me feel what you were writing. Nicely done. Dave |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this, Floria. Perhaps you'll even stay. That is a haunting ending. Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Floria, Great write. Love is always a risk but perhaps con becomes for sure. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep those windows open, dear...it's the only way we can hear the bird's song... enjoyed this! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is touching indeed, the longing and the desire, the open window and the staying power of the heart. Lovely poem Floria~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Newell, you do make me blush, thank you very much for your sweet reply, floria Sea, I thank you so much for reading and replying, floria Vandana, thanks much for replying. floria Startime, Why did I know you would like this. LOL... thanks coming from you it is a compliment. floria Floria |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Floria Your words warmed my heart and made me smile. You always weave so much magic with your wonderful words and this would have to be one of my favourites. The images were simply stunning my friend. Take care........Sue Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Noah dear for your kind reply. floria Dave thank you so much, I appreciate your input, floria Sandra thank you, for stopping by reading and replying, floria Larry, thank you much, yes you are right, floria sunshine, yes indeed, I love birds...thanks, floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Blues thank you so much, you felt what I had intended when I wrote this. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is wonderful, Floria...  The window of my heart, I keep it open wide. Perhaps one day you'll come along, and stop to look inside. And enter at the door, to bring a sweet bouquet. Perhaps you'll even stay. Perhaps you'll even stay. It tells of what a wonderful welcoming person you are....((huggggsssss)) copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (02-17-2002 11:21 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely..and original floria...hugs...enjoyed very much as always.. ~Vic |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautiful Floria. It rings of hopefulness and sincerity, and a willingness to share an eternity of love. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Floria--To be open to love, to friendship, to flower a bouquet of words of you. That is beautiful! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Lyra thank you so much for you kind reply and the window . floriaThanks Victoria for stopping by and replying. floria Midnite thanks for reading all those beautiful things into my poem. floria Martie, thanks for your kind words. floria Floria |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
floria, Here it is...*bump*  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAhahaha Larry you are a riot. I saw this poem up here and I said, who in the world bumped this up. And it was you. I thought you were joking, I see you are a man of your word. LOL.....floria Floria |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, I'd rather be at the bottom of all this weight than not be here at all... Don't know what to add...I mean... ..."very, very beautiful...I loved every word...fantastic...sigh, sigh, kiss on cheek, nicely done, I love this, haunting, and so on...GAZOOKS WOMAN! ME THINKS YOU'VE GOT A WINNER! Really I loved every word, and read it several times...I do so enjoy what you write, my friend. jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
floria, You're the best...poet and friend. Aaaand love the pic! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, a very lovely poem *s |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad for Larry's bump. *S* I would have hated to miss this... it's beautiful. *S* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes it's hard not to close those blinds isn't it? I hope you keep those windows open wide |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
The window of my heart, I keep it open wide. Perhaps one day you'll come along, and stop to look inside. And enter at the door, to bring a sweet bouquet. Perhaps you'll even stay. Perhaps you'll even stay ----------------- Perhaps he'd stay.... Wonderful and touching in so many ways.... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you jwesley you are just too kind sir. thank you for reading every word. floria thanks much James. floria Larry you are too Koool thanks. floria Floria |
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