And one more! Turn Your Back

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Open Poetry #19

And one more! Turn Your Back

AJ Keating
Junior Member

since 2001-05-10

Posts 26
New Hampshire

0 posted 2002-03-20 10:34 PM

This was written the same time I wrote New Day, at 6:30 sunday morning (damn sun)

kinda cliche i know, but it's music, it's allowed to be ;-)

I don't want to get too close, feel too safe,
Find a lasting comfort in the lines of your face.
I've been there before and it's never the same;
Comfort has a habit of turning to pain.

  Girl turn your back, don't look in my eye.
  Spread your angel wings and take to the sky.
  I have to let you go and leave me tonight,
  Though something inside just doesn't seem right.

I've been down this road before,
It always looks the same first foot through the door.
Start running down the beaten path,
Somehow get lost and suffer natures wrath.

  Girl turn your back, don't look in my eye.
  Spread your angel wings and take to the sky.
  I have to let you go and leave me tonight,
  Though something inside just doesn't seem right.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-03-20 10:36 PM

Go ahead, blame me all you want...you keep turning stuff like this out to us, I'll keep getting you up!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-03-20 10:38 PM

  Girl turn your back, don't look in my eye.
  Spread your angel wings and take to the sky.
  I have to let you go and leave me tonight,
  Though something inside just doesn't seem right.
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Cool write Adam.  I would love to hear this put to music!  Good stuff.  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-20 10:47 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is fabulous, sweet friend, I too would love to hear this put to music, maybe when you record it you can try and put a MP3 on here so we can listen to you! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Adam, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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