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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-03-20 09:31 PM


I Really Do Love You  (version 2)

I listened carefully
as my sweetheart
said these sweet
words to me.

"James my life was empty
and you gave me back my life.
I love you.  I love you.
I really love you."

Her sweet words brought the
following thoughts to me.

"This is exactly the
woman that I need.
I love her.  I love her.
Jin I really do love you."

JamesLee
and
HeyJin
March20
2002



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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-03-20 09:37 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I hope that these thoughts forever remain in your heart and every time you look into her eyes you will feel these words come back to you and her words of love will also speak to your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you always write romance so beautifully! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Saunni
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2 posted 2002-03-20 09:49 PM


James, short but awesome! I really do like this poem! Thanks.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Pilgrimage
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Texas, USA
3 posted 2002-03-20 10:02 PM


How very nice this one is!

Nan

Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-03-20 10:31 PM


JamesMichael...I am sure this poem will warm the heart of the one you love. It is beautiful and full of love and adoration.

***Ivy Rose

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-03-20 10:33 PM


James this is so tender.  There is no way she could resist you.  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

RosePetal
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6 posted 2002-03-20 10:37 PM


james, love looks good on you my friend
Can I see version 1 also? I'd love to read it.

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