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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-03-20 11:20 AM

All that It seems
Like a love
A love that was longing on
my shoulder
All that It seems
like a song,
That Is all
written In your heart
All It seems
like a call,
A whispering words
In your ears,
All that It sems
It seems like
just happening
for real
If It Is seems like a fall,
A fallen love
To touch,
A fallen rain
Even all
that It seems
It seems like
full of stars
Tonight,
my love,
That stars are so bright,
All that It seems
It seems all over us
like falling
It over and over again
All that It seems
It seems like a star,
A star
shinning on us
Making wishes
upon a star
Taking your hand In mine
All that It seems
like a dream
All that It seems......

[This message has been edited by vandana (03-20-2002 11:21 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-03-20 11:22 AM

Vandana,
Enjoyed the read.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-03-20 12:41 PM

vandana,

It is all that it seems. Enjoy your thoughts!

((vandana))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-20-2002 12:41 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-20 01:49 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooo beautifully spellbinding, sweet friend, may you forever wish upon that star and hold all your dreams that come true dear to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is magical, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2002-03-20 01:55 PM

Vandana, the repetition of the lines and the thoughts give this a dream like quality, which I hope is what you were striving for. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry...

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-03-20 05:46 PM

Vandana this is most beautiful.

"It seems like
full of stars
Tonight,
my love,
That stars are so bright,
All that It seems
It seems all over us
like falling "

I love your expression and repeating of lines. wonderful work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-03-20 05:56 PM

lovely vandana...very enjoyable read hugs

~Victoria

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-03-20 07:29 PM

lovely poem, vandana

*s

M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-03-20 07:40 PM

Very lovely...the words danced down the page. I look forward to more of your writing. Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2002-03-21 01:36 AM

This is lovely Vandana. The dream of love…oh keep dreaming. For it’s such a rude awakening when it ends.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (03-21-2002 01:36 AM).]

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