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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
the crystal shard cutting your eye came from the heart of a young man so blessedly ignorant of your type he waded into your pain like water except you had only faked it and everything else in your sorry life so involved in getting somewhere never noticing the blisters where you tread what you saw in him was not interest at least not in his heart, money yes a way to bide your time, pay your bills extracting the cost from his blood all this time he believes in you his fragile heart held in your hands you grow bored get a loan from daddy and with crocodile tears in your eyes you smash his heart with a hint of a smile |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I could feel the pain in this one James. But it is so well written! It cuts clean through to some hidden spaces. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Chalk it up to experience. This is the kind of thing that makes cynics of idealists. I like the poem. Nan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, The writing is good, I enjoyed the read |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to everyone who is hurt by this unexpected heartbreak and betrayal! (sad sigh) This is so sad but powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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