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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635


0 posted 2002-03-19 12:51 PM


For Enchantress...

Perhaps...

the first commitment
outweighed
the second promise

no matter

she waits

~ ~ ~

Perhaps...

this ache
is felt

stronger

with age

knowing mortality
comes soon

~ ~ ~

Perhaps...

should she ever
love again

she already knows

the difference
was him

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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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1 posted 2002-03-19 01:05 PM


Wow...these are really good.  Especially like the last one.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-03-19 02:30 PM


OH MY!! Thank you so much!  My how I love these...no 'perhaps' about it!!  Hugs.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-03-19 03:07 PM


Just came bsck to click the library button, sorry.  
*Nancy exists with sheepish grin*

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-03-19 04:12 PM




WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I can tell Nancy really loves this just as I do! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your poems always have me thinking happily, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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