Open Poetry #19 |
Couldn't Someone Just Please Tell Me How... |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So much pain I hold from the past Remaining thoughts hauntingly last Sorrows buried deep inside From those emotions I can’t hide. To sort them through oh how I have tried I can’t get past the tears~ and the lies. A different place, a different year Still those memories bring back a fear. I give my heart with love and devotion As it drifts away on smooth sailing oceans But trust is so hard to again try to grow I can’t chase this away, it just will not go. It scares me to try to do this again Please, oh please let love finally win. Oh couldn’t someone just please tell me how To let go of the past~ and live in the now? On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-19-2002 11:26 AM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Gentle Spirit. You inspire me to write: Love and Truth We always have our memories As we walk each new day But there's a choice, one always sees When going forth to play. To look ahead at life's new road Or live in constant fear Be free to give just love and go Or look back in a mirror. The safest way I've found to do Is never to forget But walk ahead, eyes open, too New truth is better yet. Always walk in truth. Look! See! New Love will bind to stay For Love and Truth in Purity Is always God's Best Way. ((Gentle Spirit)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write that absolutely aches Donna. Time...it takes time. Hugs sweet lady. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Donna darling girl OH MY! Such an outstanding and wonderful piece of writing, I’ve read fabulous pieces from you before this is simply stunning. Truly you’ve outdone yourself darling girl . YOU have left treasure here to inspire, utterly utterly perfectly penned darling girl What can I say except this is utterly wonderful. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you already know my friend. . . touching, and from your heart. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all for such lovely replies. Newell your poetic reply is perfect. Enchantress, thank you so much for that very much needed hug right now...it warms me. Mushy, I didn't expect that, thank you so much. Sven, I don't know if I know, but perhaps Enchantress is correct......time.....maybe. Thanks dear friends... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-19-2002 04:10 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Donna, we can all feel your sorrow in these words and all our hearts go out to you! (sigh) Time will always ease the hurt, sweet friend, always believe in yourself and turn your back from yesterday and always look for the happy possibilities tomorrow will bring! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'It scares me to try to do this again Please, oh please let love finally win. Oh couldn’t someone just please tell me how To let go of the past~ and live in the now?' Hon if it is right, you will be able to do it again. It is not easy to let go, but you will know when it is time. This was a very touching write. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Yes Gentle Spirit I can hear the anxiety in this piece. You must remember, nothing ventured nothing gained. This is truly lovely. floria Floria |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and again....my thanks...... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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