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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-03-19 11:23 AM


So much pain I hold from the past
Remaining thoughts hauntingly last
Sorrows buried deep inside
From those emotions I can’t hide.

To sort them through oh how I have tried
I can’t get past the tears~ and the lies.
A different place, a different year
Still those memories bring back a fear.

I give my heart with love and devotion
As it drifts away on smooth sailing oceans
But trust is so hard to again try to grow
I can’t chase this away, it just will not go.

It scares me to try to do this again
Please, oh please let love finally win.
Oh couldn’t someone just please tell me how
To let go of the past~ and live in the now?



On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-19-2002 11:26 AM).]

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Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-03-19 12:08 PM


Gentle Spirit. You inspire me to write:

Love and Truth

We always have our memories
As we walk each new day
But there's a choice, one always sees
When going forth to play.

To look ahead at life's new road
Or live in constant fear
Be free to give just love and go
Or look back in a mirror.

The safest way I've found to do
Is never to forget
But walk ahead, eyes open, too
New truth is better yet.

Always walk in truth. Look! See!
New Love will bind to stay
For Love and Truth in Purity
Is always God's Best Way.

((Gentle Spirit))
-newell  

  

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-03-19 12:29 PM


Wonderful write that absolutely aches Donna.
Time...it takes time.  Hugs sweet lady.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marsha
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3 posted 2002-03-19 01:34 PM


Donna darling girl OH MY! Such an outstanding and wonderful piece of writing, I’ve read fabulous pieces from you before this is simply stunning. Truly you’ve outdone yourself darling girl .

YOU have left treasure here to inspire, utterly utterly perfectly penned darling girl

What can I say except this is utterly wonderful.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Sven
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4 posted 2002-03-19 03:19 PM


you already know my friend. . .

touching, and from your heart. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-03-19 04:09 PM


Thanks to all for such lovely replies. Newell your poetic reply is perfect.  
Enchantress, thank you so much for that very much needed hug right now...it warms me.
Mushy, I didn't expect that, thank you so much.
Sven, I don't know if I know, but perhaps Enchantress is correct......time.....maybe.
Thanks dear friends...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-19-2002 04:10 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-03-19 04:26 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Donna, we can all feel your sorrow in these words and all our hearts go out to you! (sigh) Time will always ease the hurt, sweet friend, always believe in yourself and turn your back from yesterday and always look for the happy possibilities tomorrow will bring! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2002-03-19 05:29 PM


'It scares me to try to do this again
Please, oh please let love finally win.
Oh couldn’t someone just please tell me how
To let go of the past~ and live in the now?'

Hon if it is right, you will be able to do it again. It is not easy to let go, but you will know when it is time. This was a very touching write.  Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

vandana
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8 posted 2002-03-19 05:32 PM


enjoy your read
strbbux
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9 posted 2002-03-19 05:32 PM


Yes Gentle Spirit I can hear the anxiety in this piece. You must remember, nothing ventured nothing gained. This is truly lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2002-03-20 09:13 PM


and again....my thanks......

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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