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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Perhaps… because it is raining that this wetness… lingers on my brow with the taste of you, still here… on my lips Perhaps because it is raining it is why I see a shadow here in the mist wanting it needing it to be you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that word always catches my eye...*s perhaps you will write another one as nice as this one, soon.... M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
perhaps... this is lovely... no.. no perhaps about it... it is lovely. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Decaflame....Perhaps because I frequently tinker at hammer away so much at my own I tend to encourage others to do the same. But not everyone writes that way. This poem is loaded with potential. Don't be afraid to stare at it until it blinks. Again....lots here. Bob |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca There is sadness here in this rain of words. Wishing you sunshine! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perhaps I love this because I know this ache of wanting someone so..... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame, Good write, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) So sad but beautful, sweet friend, I can relate to this feeling all too well for it always seems cloudy to me when I am alone and yearning for my love, but when she's close, there is always sunshine from her smile! (sigh) May your heart forever smile with true love and may you be showered with bliss always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, indeed. . . well done. . . a portrait in darkness. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
that this wetness lingers on my brow with the taste of you, still here on my lips ========================== its raining kisses?  mmm mmm mmm this is a lovely lesson in less IS more and I need me some rain like this. *L* perhaps you wont stay away so long now dear Decca.  Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
such a melancholy, sad, wanting and yet hopeful portrayal of feelings....this is beautiful, flaming one.. |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Sigh, I wish i can get rid of this feeling right now, but you put it to words well. Thx for the read right now more than ever i seem to relate to it. :-( There's a peace inside us all |
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