Open Poetry #19 |
My eyes |
Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
I close my eyes and I can see you so clearly The vision of your face, your eyes, your smile reflections in my eyes Your voice echo's through my mind, so calming as I reflect upon your touch, so gentle and inticing Your embrace firm yet relaxed as we melt into the moments of each other For it is here that we have found a resting place for our souls A place where our hearts become one Always and Forever My eyes open, and I can see you clearly Expressions, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
just beautiful!! I love the ending |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sounds like love to me, Fee. "Your embrace firm yet relaxed as we melt into the moments of each other" That is really wonderful. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
peaceful piece |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love the ending, this is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, may your eyes forever reflect the light of true love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A wonderful write! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Fee This was so very beautiful and so much enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
and THAT is the way LOVE should be.... no Fee paid, only offered willingly...... ........ a striking verse of beauty! thank you for the read! |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so kindly for your words. It is funny how the heart can write, and the words tell the story and only then do we read the words and find the meaning. Love you all very much. Thanks Fee Expressions, |
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