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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Rev[e]lation Even imaginings become real after time… …you did You found in my fantasy a decision to see if a bubble were to burst, would either of us still exist… fragile was the time when you allowed my dream reality to walk into your arms can you feel me, still? The taste of you wakes me and I would dream to kiss you again if nothing more than to revel in your elation. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
fragile was the time when you allowed my dream reality to walk into your arms can you feel me, still? The taste of you wakes me and I would dream to kiss you again if nothing more than to revel in your elation. =================================== my oh my...I stop in for a lunch break and now I leave with an burning ache  very very nice SN ... very. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is just brilliant. . . I love the word play here. . . it fills it all the more with the ache that you have. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Me too, I loved the work play, but even more I loved the feeling of sheer romance in this one. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
leaving here with a soft sigh, knowing that at the moment anything else will be a let down. very nice, very nice. Chris [This message has been edited by Christopher (03-18-2002 07:41 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Solier Noir darling girl Oh my I’m stunned with admiration this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and form in this is absolutely excellent. I can actually feel the depth of this, this is utterly utterly wonderful. Truly awesome writing you are always a fabulous writer, in this you have excelled yourself. I can hear the longing reaching from the page into my heart with this beautiful piece of writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Such yearning and beauty fill your words, sweet friend, I wish for all this happiness to come to you and you will forever dance in the happiness of true love with the one you love! (big huggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Soliel....this is absolutely outstanding Even imaginings become real after time… …you did You found in my fantasy a decision to see if a bubble were to burst, would either of us still exist… It shows deep wisdom and a true ability with words.....the result...a beautifully written piece of work.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... I see you are consistantly good... Nice, a lucid dreaming feel to this used very well in the communication of your idea.. I enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WONDERFUL! HOORAH! This is FABULOUS! Oh, I, uh ... should say I like it, too Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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