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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Speechless I understand you. Wordlessly, each movement of eyes transmitting your want, each lip adjustment relishing the appeal. Eye sampling what the touch cannot feel in *silent time of communication*. *borrowed from a conversation this morning* [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-18-2002 09:31 AM).] |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed the read  Andrew "I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
what the touch cannot feel in *silent time of communication*. Yes, that is what dreams are for. ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A warm and lovely write. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love this Maureen...enjoyed your early bird words ha..hugss ~Victoria
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl OH MY! Such an outstanding and beautifully crafted piece of writing this is utterly utterly wonderful, you know how inspiring I find your writing and this simply glows with inspiration. Wonderful darling girl just wonderful   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very sensual in a quiet way. I enjoyed this. Cheryl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Feels like you eyedropped in on a silent conversation of looks... well done! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
m, beautiful write from your pen. i really liked this a lot...your words make me think. thank you! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Wow, this is a wonderful display of body language, sweet friend, such expressions like these can always simply say so much! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Maureen: delightful! Totally! Love the expression and connotation of: *silent time of communication*. and all it represents! Makes the reader want to know more in a National Enquirer sort of way! Jeff |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I understand you. Wordlessly, each movement of eyes transmitting your want, You say this so very beautifully, Maureen. I know this feeling...exactly...I often share it with my husband, but I don't think I could have ever expressed it as well as you have. May you have many hugggssss! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I should have mentioned this idea came from Marsha *s Andrew, Newell, Sy, and Victoria, thank you. I appreciate you. Marsha..well I was truly inspired by you that day hugss M Cheryl, Sunshine, Amy and Noah, thank you for your responses *s Jeff, inquiring minds want to know? Not much there but thanks *s Lyra, you can express just about anything well. But who needs words if you have the real thing *s Thank You. hugss M |
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