Open Poetry #19 |
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Loving you |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida ![]() |
I want to pull the plug Delete you from my memory You're taking up my space Pushing my buttons Making it difficult to function As we talk about a whole lot of nothin' Until you make little errors That give me big problems I feel like throwing you out the window In spite of the fact that I need you Does this compute? You freeze up when I give you commands You're far too slow to meet my demands I should really trade you in Loving you was good but something new has to begin Byebye 56k time for dsl Super fast downloads sound really swell Oh how I need you baby Dell It's almost over with Mr. Packard Bell hehehehehehehehehehehehehe ![]() [This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-17-2002 05:50 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ a cute write...very cute M |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Joanna, no! No DSI. Go Cable! ![]() ((Joanna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Joanna this is a really clever piece of writing, you had me there, I was saying to myself OH NO, thinking something dreadful had happened to you and Noah. Thank you for the smile this gave me. You are a very good writer ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I have cox cable..its wonderful..this was great joanna..loved it..you had us going for a minute haa..hugss ~Vic |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing this wonderful read, but all I have to say is "56k Modem" ![]() Andrew ![]() "I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great one Joanna! You have a great sense of humour. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Excellently funny! I am still snickering...loved it! ![]() |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Really really cute, Joanna. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (03-17-2002 07:34 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (giggles in delight) Awwwwwwwww, I am so happy for your new found happiness! (giggles) I love you so much, sweet friend, I am so happy you're getting a Dell so I can talk with you more, for you are the girl I love and I will always love you soooooooooo much! (kisses on lips) You are the girl of my dreams, the Shakira of my heart! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Geeze, you had me worried here. *rolls eyes* no idea what modem I have. Great write! I am a rabid horse. |
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