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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-03-17 05:49 PM


I want to pull the plug
Delete you from my memory
You're taking up my space
Pushing my buttons
Making it difficult to function
As we talk about a whole lot of nothin'
Until you make little errors
That give me big problems

I feel like throwing you out the window
In spite of the fact that I need you
Does this compute?
You freeze up when I give you commands
You're far too slow to meet my demands
I should really trade you in
Loving you was good
but something new has to begin

Byebye 56k time for dsl
Super fast downloads sound really swell
Oh how I need you baby Dell
It's almost over with Mr. Packard Bell

hehehehehehehehehehehehehe  

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-17-2002 05:50 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-03-17 06:03 PM


~smiling~  a cute write...very cute

M

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-03-17 06:07 PM


Joanna, no! No DSI. Go Cable!

((Joanna))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Krissy
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3 posted 2002-03-17 06:08 PM


Joanna this is a really clever piece of writing, you had me there, I was saying to myself OH NO, thinking something dreadful had happened to you and Noah. Thank you for the smile this gave me. You are a very good writer


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy


And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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4 posted 2002-03-17 06:10 PM


I have cox cable..its wonderful..this was great joanna..loved it..you had us going for a minute haa..hugss

             ~Vic

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5 posted 2002-03-17 06:20 PM


Thank you for sharing this wonderful read, but all I have to say is  "56k Modem"

Andrew

"I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-03-17 07:23 PM


Great one Joanna!  You have a great sense of humour.  
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

PearlsB4Swine
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7 posted 2002-03-17 07:33 PM


Excellently funny! I am still snickering...loved it!
Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-03-17 07:34 PM


Really really cute, Joanna.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (03-17-2002 07:34 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-03-17 08:03 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwwww, I am so happy for your new found happiness! (giggles) I love you so much, sweet friend, I am so happy you're getting a Dell so I can talk with you more, for you are the girl I love and I will always love you soooooooooo much! (kisses on lips) You are the girl of my dreams, the Shakira of my heart! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2002-03-18 01:42 AM


Geeze, you had me worried here. *rolls eyes* no idea what modem I have. Great write!

I am a rabid horse.

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