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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-03-17 03:14 PM

Guard my dreams,
please.
Wrap them,
in slumber keep,
as my body
leaves me
rendered
useless.
Whisper through,
touching my senses
in this minding lull,
isolating me
finally,
in the silence
of my solitude.

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-17-2002 03:16 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-17 03:18 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too wish for love to always rest close to your heart and bring peace and comfort to you always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is very well-expressed! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-03-17 03:20 PM

Maureen, what beautiful thoughts, you write. I love them. And I love your new picture. You are indeed beautiful.

((Maureen))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-17-2002 03:21 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-03-17 04:53 PM

Very, Very good!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-03-17 07:03 PM

Nicely done hon..hugss enjoyed as always..

~Victoria

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2002-03-17 07:05 PM

This is very good.

PearlsB4Swine
Member

since 2002-02-01

Posts 130
where the heart finds me

6 posted 2002-03-17 07:12 PM

An inspiring piece that gives me pause for reflection and meditation...nicely done.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-03-17 07:38 PM

This is exquisite, Maureen and I love your new photo too!

hugggssss!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

8 posted 2002-03-17 07:56 PM

Quiescence is so easy to find in that quiet solitude, very well done GF!

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

9 posted 2002-03-17 08:46 PM

Maur: this is dead-bang good writing!
Love the short-style as well as the wording on this!
Let us know, will you, how the Dr. Appt goes, ok? *smiles*
Please write some more of this caliber and style! Jeff

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

10 posted 2002-03-17 11:43 PM

nakdthoughts....the essence of the solitude that enables us to create....this poem flows and begs to be read aloud!...mark

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

11 posted 2002-03-18 01:02 AM

Nakdthoughts, so beautiful and so creative! I like this one a lot! Be well!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2002-03-19 09:08 PM

Love the place you write of, where we can tune out the world and simply be.

Enjoyed your calming words Maureen~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2002-03-19 09:14 PM

Oh, so chillingly beautiful, Maureen. I will send you an aurora dream, to wrap you in glowing lights.

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