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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-17 01:19 AM


Hungry?
15 or less

Hungry?
Have a jam sandwich
Two pieces of bread
Jammed together

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (03-17-2002 01:20 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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1 posted 2002-03-17 01:34 AM


Nope, think I'll make mine a chip butty thanks!!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Bridget Shenachie
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2 posted 2002-03-17 01:49 AM


LOL at this one.  Sounds like a recipe that I could handle.

Shenachie

Saunni
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3 posted 2002-03-17 03:14 AM


Marsha, lol, cool write. Enjoyed!

Sauni @~~~>~~

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Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-03-17 07:50 AM



you jam
my jelly
around
PB 'tween
breading

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-03-17 07:56 AM


Marsha,
Loved it.

Rex Allen McCoy
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6 posted 2002-03-17 08:24 AM


Do I have to eat it with nothing on?
I mean ... on it

couldn't resist

Pilgrimage
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7 posted 2002-03-17 10:43 AM


Dear Marsha,
Now you're just being silly. Where's the chocolate in that?

Nan

Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-03-17 11:14 AM


Yep, now you've captured the spirit of less is more. Make mine on whole grain bread and put a thick layer of Mushy in the middle. Your words, darling girl are my favorite jam. But do butter them up a bit. Please.  

((Marsha))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-17-2002 11:15 AM).]

ShadowRider
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9 posted 2002-03-17 11:45 AM


Have a jam sam-mich
minus the jam

I 'member this type of poem from my childhood.
Laughing here....there must be 1000's of PB&J poems floating around out there!
Deeper tho, the connotations have ...other....meanings.....hmmmm
JkF

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10 posted 2002-03-17 11:46 AM






(smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...this would be a wonderful Passions picnic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always such a delight to read! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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