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Open Poetry #19

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Maverick Wolf
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 94
Scandia, MN

0 posted 2002-03-16 11:26 PM

I don't think I'm better than you
I'm sure I'm not
But I see what you do not
I see the unseen

You see a mask
I see a face
You see skin
I see a soul

You see an act
I see a scream
You see a smile
I see a tear

You see the game
As I see the cards fall
You hear the story
Not the stories I could tell

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-03-16 11:38 PM

No doubt, we all see things differently,
but I sure liked how you wrote this.

Interpretations are dangerous, and fascinating at best.

Nice to read you~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-17 03:37 PM

(sigh) Wow, this is very emotionally powerful, sweet friend, I too believe we are all unique in our own ways though in situations like this differences can be so aching! (sigh) This is very poignant, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-03-17 05:26 PM

*nods* Yup, definately a keeper. I love the way you brought the mask everyone shows the world into this. Thanks for the read!

I am a rabid horse.

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

4 posted 2002-03-23 06:06 PM

I think I may be the only one who fully understands this piece, and I don't know if this is another stab at me or what but I liked it anyway. A lot! It seems you are evolving in style, maturing if you will. Well written.

"Why should I live? Why should I do anything? Is there in life any purpose which the inevitable death that awaits me does not undo and destroy?" -- Le

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-03-23 06:48 PM

Maverick Wolf...GREAT POEM!!! Really enjoyed the many twists and turns of this beautifully written poem. ***Ivy Rose

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