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The Notebook (20 or less)
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The Notebook (20 or less) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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I fell in love Reading open pages From the “Notebook” Heard your laughter Among the seas, Dance me again, Endless night  Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-16-2002 06:49 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
"The Notebook", ummmmm, sounds a little mysterious....Nicely done Lauren.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hope the notebook is shared...sounds very interesting... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautiful Lauren... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sounds wonderful, Lauren. ((Lauren)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sing from the heart and ignite magic upon these pages! (kiss on cheek) This is a fabulous reply to the challenge, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much!You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you fr sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh to read the words from someone's notebook or journal and find yourself enthralled with their thoughts... beautifully written!! i loved this! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
The notebook....much more interesting than a little black book. *s Pretty thoughts! Enjoyed *s |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
To pick up a notebook, a journal...to read someone elses thoughts and revel in their spirit. What a treasure Lauren....just beautiful. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, I should have left that notebook out sooner had I known about the invitation! Delightful 20 or less. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I vision you sneaking a peak at his notebook and reading his thoughts of you, and I loved what I saw in my mind. Oh this was too cool you know that. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You captured a lovely scene with so few words Lauren, just beautiful. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Lauren..and i agree with Chans haa..more interesting than a black book..at least than my black book haa... ~Victoria
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, Well put, enjoyed the read. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
To hear the heart among the words is when they are true. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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