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Thank You Darling
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Thank You Darling |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
(So often we say thank you for the "things" people give us or do for us, but forget to thank our loved ones for the intangibles.) I take every opportunity to tell you I Love You, but seldom do I manage to add a Thank You too. So now while I am sitting here just thinking of your smile let me tell you what I’m thankful for though it may take a little while. Thank you for your friendship of course that is number one! Thank you for your concern when my life feels all undone. Thanks a million for your shoulder, I hope you don’t mind when it’s wet, and thanks so much for giving me moments I will not forget! Thank you for understanding, and for letting me be ME but don’t let me forget to say Thank you for Loving me! Now if this seems all one sided Darling, don’t you fret, for this is still not everything I haven’t said it all just yet! For I still want to thank you for feeling close enough to me to let me know your troubles and set your feelings free. Thank you dear for talking, when you need to let it out and thank you for believing I’m here for you without a doubt. And Thank you Dear for knowing that when I give you little things it’s not the gift that matters but that they each give my heart wings! Thanks for learning, thanks for teaching, thanks for sharing with me too, and most of all, my Darling, thanks for letting me Love you! Poetry is an expression of feelings. I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even words can become intangible, if not written down, from time to time, as you have done... thank You! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big huggssssssss) Awwwwwww, this is such a beautifully heartfelt poem, sweet friend, I can feel just a little sadness in these words but overall much hope and upbeat expression feels these thoughts! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may the magic of loves memories forever fill your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Janmew, what a delightful way to say thank you. Charming! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
your meter and cadence are impecible!! you are clearly a writer with experience and your writing style is so effective... i know what it feels like to love like this and you have put those feelings into beautiful lines... thank you for sharing this!! |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Thank you all very much. Jan |
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