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She'd Say Yes
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She'd Say Yes |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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She'd Say Yes She believed the world frowned upon her mere existence That the path to happiness excluded her lonesome heart She only knew the opposite of willingness each day given And, fear paved her obvious struggle to falling apart... For the first time pleasant had bordered her entire being Secure seemed to engrave the ground her footsteps made A conscious decision to allow herself to take in this peace And, now she'd say yes to those thoughts her mind replays... There is just something in the way he gently reaches out For, there's only one pair of hands that tenderness runs through She'd say yes to the excited calm his fingertips give her The only ones she finds absolute heaven folding hers into... Emotions plague her like the feeling of the first spring time breeze It is a never forgotten moment within natures song She wouldn't pause if the arms of compassion pulled her even a little closer She'd say yes, if in his sundown, he'd want to hold her all night long... Surprising to the mind and even to her so willing heart Finds her anxious at what his hands can offer to all that she owns What she'd give to finally feel what's real on a whole new course And, she would say yes to even that kind of affection shown... Or, in a moments weakness when the urge is just way to hard to resist She'd say yes, in a heartbeat, to the sweetness of his so wanted kiss She would say yes to any new kind of feeling found And, wouldn't hesitate at all if he wanted to lay her down... Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet Saunni, my heart goes out to her and the doubt she felt before but I hope now she has begun to love herself so much and believe that soon she will feel loves first kiss and she would forever have the strength to accept with the power of love the promises that lay ahead for her! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet freind, your gorgeous words are always so delightful to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"She'd say yes to the excited calm his fingertips give her The only ones she finds absolute heaven folding hers into..." awesome.....and the ending....*sigh*...and wow!! love it!!  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW... thats all I can really say anymore about your writing...amazing. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I say Yes, this needs to be seen again...  |
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