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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-03-15 09:39 PM

To say I love you
one more time
and know that you smile
hearing it

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-03-15 09:40 PM

to hear I love you
and know
you still mean it

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-03-15 09:41 PM

Duncan, those are words that can never be said enough. This is very well thought out and presented. Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-15 09:42 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever reply that she loves you back to you and may you forever echo these smiles of true love forever and ever! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2002-03-15 10:05 PM

Duncan,

You are getting good at this

Just goes to show the power of words. Very nice

.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-15 10:06 PM

Duncan ... this is superb...a very well used
selection of words with an excellent message.

Nice...

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2002-03-15 10:18 PM

Excellent writing! Its so cool to see everyone trying out the 20 or less hehe

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-03-15 10:37 PM

*psssst* hey Duncan ....
you just did

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2002-03-15 10:41 PM

This style was made for you, duncan.....

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2002-03-16 12:07 PM

Yup! You are doing great on these Duncan. Your message was great in this one too.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

10 posted 2002-03-16 12:18 PM

one time......... will bring a smile of beauty to her face....

beautifully penned!!! lovely!

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

11 posted 2002-03-16 01:36 AM

me sits with a big smile...thank you, Duncan
...

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

12 posted 2002-03-16 01:57 AM

Loved the format in this lovely, 20 word poem about love... ***Ivy Rose

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2002-03-16 02:16 AM

Yes...James

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

14 posted 2002-03-16 02:28 AM

to hear
i love you
but i like you
even more

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

15 posted 2002-03-16 11:04 AM

I know I've made that wish before. Nicely done.

Dave

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

16 posted 2002-03-16 02:43 PM

Thanks all...Slick, I think you've given me the key to this one, thanks!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

17 posted 2002-03-16 03:55 PM

We are on the same wave length, Duncan.
Good one.
Sandra

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

18 posted 2002-03-16 10:28 PM

Wish I may wish I might have the wish I wish tonight! Just reading this made me smile, I can only imagine what it does to her!!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

19 posted 2002-03-16 10:29 PM

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

20 posted 2002-03-17 01:56 AM

Whoa! You come up with such great stuff that I'm thinking of starting a course in Romantic Articulation for Tongue-tied Males and using your poems for the text.

O.K. with you?

Shenachie

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

21 posted 2002-03-17 02:49 AM

You said alot in just those few words. Enjoyed.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

22 posted 2002-03-17 05:23 AM

sigh...............

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

23 posted 2002-03-17 09:29 AM

Now this is romantic!

*smiles*

~Tier

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

24 posted 2002-03-17 09:44 AM

What Shenachie said...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

25 posted 2002-03-17 12:06 PM

Duncan,
Good one.

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