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Morcastlin
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0 posted 2002-03-15 09:24 AM


*I wrote this to express the memory of lost love.

Delicious desire
Soft and silky silences
Ah, love...I was cruel

© Copyright 2002 Bonnie B. Hayes - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-03-15 09:33 AM


*smiling...who can't relate  to this...

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Marsha
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2 posted 2002-03-15 09:34 AM


Morcastlin darling girl NOW this is utterly utterly outstanding writing. Sooooooo beautifully written, I find these so hard to do. You however have written this excellently


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy




To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (03-15-2002 09:34 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-03-15 10:00 AM


Morcastlin,
Enjoyed the read.

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-03-15 10:10 AM


Beautifully said.

((Bonnie))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-03-15 10:12 AM


Outstanding!

~Tier

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6 posted 2002-03-15 12:01 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Bonnie, I am so sorry you have experienced los tlove, and I hope now happiness fills your heart and love now whispers to you forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Gaia
7 posted 2002-03-15 12:55 PM


Well done!
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