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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
*I wrote this to express the memory of lost love. Delicious desire Soft and silky silences Ah, love...I was cruel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*smiling...who can't relate to this... M |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Morcastlin darling girl NOW this is utterly utterly outstanding writing. Sooooooo beautifully written, I find these so hard to do. You however have written this excellently   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (03-15-2002 09:34 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Morcastlin, Enjoyed the read. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautifully said. ((Bonnie)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Outstanding! ~Tier |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Bonnie, I am so sorry you have experienced los tlove, and I hope now happiness fills your heart and love now whispers to you forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Well done! |
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