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Re-musings.......response to Tim's Musings
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Re-musings.......response to Tim's Musings |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Re-musings….response to Tim’s Musings ...but with hope, and faith, and more, peace finds life by which to soar... …for is not hope but smallest seed? by which life springs forth in given need? …is not the birth of crying babe a way by which we’re told we’re saved? …does the blackest sky of night stay high? nay, revelation reveals sun’s rise… as yet black doubt may come again as does sin, and horror, reign, the need for seed to dis-plant greed becomes then this human’s need… all things then seem on a cycle, bent and yet then, hope, is heaven-lent… Thanks to Tim, for kick-starting my moody muse.... 15 March 2002 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart girl is simply gorgeous, absolutely perfect. The flow of this river of words is a pure delight. Beautifully written, well done You know I love this don’t you? Of course you do now go and write something I can keep up with. This is beauty too rich and fair for everyday use. Absolutely perfect writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A lovely write, enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea! Thanks for 'kick starting' my morning!  I'm off and running. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sunshine, I love the positivity and freedom the words in your poem inspire... well done! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ugh, I hate those moody Muses. . . they never listen. . . well done my friend. . .perhaps a good kick would work for me as well. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
…is not the birth of crying babeThat line to me IS the balance, well done Sunshine (a keeper from your moody muse). The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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