Open Poetry #19 |
The Dance |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
She reaches out her hand in hope that he will take it in his own To travel with her to that place Atwirl away from shadows home. Feet whisping o'er the ocean sands in dance of love to never end A fade from black to white, then rose The finest way a night to spend. The fire glows, but not as bright as does her heart and soul in beat A primitive and simple thing The sky and sand and earth to meet. Delusion becomes truthfulness and fantasies re-emergent As two blend into one sweet dream to glide together, until spent. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (02-16-2002 08:58 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, Maybe I can dance...afterall. Lovely. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - another of your lovely poems. Enjoy reading them... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe you wrote this for me, so I would smile, and swirl... thank you! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever skip barefeet and dance with your love on eternity's sands forever after! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Delusion becomes truthfulness and fantasies re-emergent As two blend into one sweet dream to glide together, until spent. Nicely put hon..as always..enjoyed your words..hugss ~Vic "Silence is a friend who |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
catalinamoon, Sounds like the perfect safe haven we all need. You created it nicely. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"The sky and sand and earth to meet." Lovely! May I have this dance, my friend? Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Larry's reply...suddenly he remembers how to dance. This is wonderful Sandra....I feel after reading this that I would love to swirl and dance at the ocean's edge. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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