Open Poetry #19 |
Drought |
GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Desert Storm Come Deliver me from this drought My flowers parched Among precarious sands Elevate me from this dry oblivion Into lush savannahs Stilled |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This poem is beautifully worded. It takes me there. Very nicely done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the garden of your heart forever blossom with flowers and be filled with joy forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Manisha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Your Gold really Sparkles in this poem. I love it. It is wonderful. ((GOlDsparklESS)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
(breathes in the fresh savannah air) aaahhhhhhh.. now isn't that better? God alone is alone. Man is not. |
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