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Wishing Well |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wishing Well By: Noah Eaton 3/14/02 Will my stars make all my dreams come true? Will my stars make all my dreams come true? Jiminy Cricket’s in my back pocket Mr. Bluebirds on my shoulder I stare at Cinderella’s Castle as fireworks sound off Yearning when my love can meet me and turn a new leaf over Just this sight makes me want to cry I consider Walt Disney my conscious guide If I can for once be one of those happy souls To see my dreams come too and hold love close to me in delight Will my stars make all my dreams come true? Will my stars make all my dreams come true? Will my stars make all my dreams come true? Will my stars make all my dreams come true? I cross my heart, rubbing a magic lamp Dreaming to take my Gwenevere on a magic carpet ride How I want to be the one to kiss your lips And wake you up from the poison apple curse of yearning deep inside I throw all my pennies into a wishing well Tears flow down my face in prayer that I’ll feel loves magic spell I can be the prince that answers your lonely mermaid sigh And carry you away on life’s cruise, hearing raptures bells Will my stars make all my dreams come true? Will my stars make all my dreams come true? Will my stars make all my dreams come true? Will my stars make all my dreams come true? I can’t imagine a whole new world without you… I can’t imagine a whole new world without you… I can’t imagine a whole new world without you… I can’t imagine a whole new world without you… I need you… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-14-2002 03:14 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah sweet Noah, I pray that all your wishes come true one day soon! I know of no one more deserving than you!  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah,my favorite of the Disney thoughts "A Dream is a wish your heart makes". I try to keep that in mind. I think your dreams will come true. Sandra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah - hugs to you for this lovely, heartfelt poem. Enjoyed. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
More like a song Noah. Would be lovely to music, floria Floria |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
noah- this was beautiful my sweet friend. your loving heart really shines in this one! disney is also one of my favorite things too! take care. amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy wonderful writing as always. Your heart cries for love in this and I truly hope your dreams are answered. My fingers are crossed for you darling boy, and if loving hearts get what they deserve your wishes will indeed come true. This is fabulous writing it really is truly wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
your deepest desires will come true in time! You deserve the utmost happiness that life has to offer |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sincere, romantic yearnings here, Noah. You write love well. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Noah~ I need you" wow yes, I love this....be well peace to you....dreams do happen...  Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Noah, The first part of this poem is lyrical, and whimsical in a longing way. Very well done. The last line is so naked in its need and intensity that it makes the whole poem. Very well done indeed. Nan |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Noah! you have outdone yourself with form and Disney-ique expression! What imagination and correlation powers you have! Cool stuff, Ami! Jeff |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this is just wonderful Noah sweetheart..  hugss~Victoria |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Throw a penney for me into that wishing well, will you? A playful yet yearning write. And when you wish upon a star, your dreams come true. Happy hugs to you, Noah. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
And what a prince you are Noah. I love the repeating in this one. Really emphasizes your feelings. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Noah, if anyone deserves their wishes to come true, it's YOU! You have a heart like no other, and believe me when I say you shine! You have a beautiful face to match that beautiful heart of yours. Be well. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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