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How Could One Forget the You..or
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How Could One Forget the You..or |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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(Crestfallen No More) How Could One Forget the You As I wipe the wake from these eyes and rearrange the position of sit, I catch the notice of your words by smiling eyes, I must admit. And as I try to breathe the air, the atmosphere surrounding me, I must admit, I'm missing you the darkness, moon in symphony To lay upon a heart that thrives upon tomorrow's dreams defined. You touch me, unforgettable, each missing word, each absent line. I feel the heat of sentiment, adverse of course to circumstance. I attitude my senses touch when you I found this morn, by chance. So how could one forget the You, the You who always bumps a touch, sending waves of smilingness throughout the days of needing such. **especially for you** M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"And as I try to breathe the air, the atmosphere surrounding me, I must admit, I'm missing you the darkness, moon in symphony To lay upon a heart that thrives upon tomorrow's dreams defined. You touch me, unforgettable, each missing word, each absent line." Oh I love this part!! It's fantastic  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I feel your footsteps within this poor poet's heart does the moon still shine Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Maureen I love your writing It touches this poet's heart Songs of love's sweet dart. ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't know who bumped you, but I am sure glad I saw this... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl, oh my how much I love this poem, it has a pure joy about it. An upbeat feel as if the you in you has been lifted from the floor. Wonderful post utterly wonderful  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SEA...thank you You touch me, unforgettable was a line that just came from within when thinking of his words of caring that he always shares. I I feel your footsteps within this poor poet's heart does the moon still shine I hear your heart's rhyme each casting upon me light opening that door. thank you *s Newell, I thank you for touch words that support, songs of strength releasing my pain. hugssss M Karilea, thank you..yes he bumps well I think and often *s M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh I love this!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So how could one forget the You, the You who always bumps a touch, sending waves of smilingness throughout the days of needing such. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Perfect! Enjoyed so much Maureen. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And as I try to breathe the air, the atmosphere surrounding me, I must admit, I'm missing you the darkness, moon in symphony To lay upon a heart that thrives upon tomorrow's dreams defined. You touch me, unforgettable, each missing word, each absent line. I ditto Sea. Great write, Maureen. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maureen, this one is so touching. Keep breathing in all these good thoughts, the caring and sharing, the tenderness. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Mushy, *s thank you, but mostly it is others who do the lifting up on passions...this was a thank you to one in particular *s.... hugss M vandana, hugss and thanks Chris ...You gave me a smile, thank you *s Nancy, glad you liked it, he does a good bump every now and then. *s Duncan .. you honor me with your visit, Thank you Midnitesun..He touches so many on here, I just wanted to return the touch. *s thank you M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ You're a real good 'thanker'~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Maureen, I just have one thing to say. I'M GLAD I'M BACK.. I have missed these wonderful poems. This is so wonderful. hope you are feeling better, floria Floria |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you again Marge, for thinking of me and my words... Floria..thank you for stpping by..glad to see you back..and as far as feeling better...I am the same..they say time will tell...so I have to wait this out..and try not to choke on my words..*s M |
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