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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Arrive safely where ever when ever burrow into your place devoid of light wrapped in your own arms enjoy Once there, find no threats or enticements yearning & fear are mere things of the past surrounding you is everything familliar you are safe I am not... ~R.T. 3/02 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) I think we can all relate to this so much, sweet friend, I have been living with much fear and nervousness right now to try and make this happiness I have last and I would do anything to have it forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is very beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ Wishing another 'god-speed' is a beautiful attibute to hold within ... even when your heart is aching with their leaving~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Once there, find no threats or enticements You wouldn't happen to have a map, would you? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Noah & Margie, thank you for your kind comments. It is interesting to see how another understands my words. You have helped me look at it from two different perspectives other than my own. Duncan, a map you say? *chuckles* If you can read hearts, then surely you'll find your way there... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
uhmm can i take this? it fits rather well right now (from the perspective i interpret it) and needs to be my words. lol i often say how i wish i could crawl in a hole and pull it in after me. there are always at least two sides, eh? nice Chris |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
BTW - wanted to add that i thought the ending was perfectly executed. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
A compassionate farewell, of sorts. In a cave, with your back to the wall, does have its security, cold though it may be. I like the way you've done this and finished it with so much said, and yet unsaid, in three words. S Arthur |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and what do we find when we settle?? or, when we feel that others are doing the same?? there's a lot that's here my friend. . . well done. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Christopher, I think that you have come quite close in your interpretation of my poem. I've read much of your work and I like the way you think. Your comments are appreciated, Thank you! S Arthur Grey, I couldn't agree more. Thank you... Sven, Some of us prefer to sit at the side of the pool and watch the crystal clear water. But, I, my friend, am a mermaid... *smiles* ~Tier |
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