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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-03-14 05:09 AM

If I Could Not Love You

Sometimes my heart
seems to have a
mind of it's own.

Especially when I
don't fully understand
where my feelings
are taking me to.

And then I realize
my heart knows how
to watch over me
and pull me through.

For where else
could my heart go
and what would my heart do
if I could not love you.

JamesLee
March14
2002

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (03-14-2002 05:13 AM).]

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2002-03-14 05:13 AM

Awww... this is so sweet, I'm wondering if it is written for anyone in particular? Anyway it is such a wonderful poem thank you for sharing it with us

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-03-14 05:15 AM

Yes Andrew...the last four lines were part of a discussion I had tonite with Jin...the woman I love...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-14 08:15 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beatiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile, I too love my Joanna so very much and dream of loving her forever as I hope she does me! (big hugggsssss) May you forrver share a lifetime of happiness with your Jin, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-03-14 08:22 AM

James,
Good write, enjoyed.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2002-03-14 09:20 AM

"And then I realize
my heart knows how
to watch over me
and pull me through.

For where else
could my heart go
and what would my heart do
if I could not love you."

this is fantastic James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-03-14 09:31 AM

Lovely, isn't it wonderful to have those strong feelings and share them?

Hugsss
M

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-03-14 09:40 AM

James darling boy this is an absolutely wonderful piece from you. I love it when you write your heart. It adds a certain something extra to your writing, lifting it to new and fabulous heights. Wonderful writing darling boy utterly utterly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-03-14 09:49 AM

JamesMichael~

Exquisite !

'For where else
could my heart go
and what would my heart do
if I could not love you.'

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-03-14 09:56 AM

loved it

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

10 posted 2002-03-14 12:28 PM

James, fantastic I gotta tell ya I luved it and I'm keeping this one in my library and ya wanna know what else me thinx this would make a great card verse...
Well you should know me by now, I get all hyped when something tickles me pink in poetry and your poem just did that....

Muahhh on cheekz2uPoetFriend this is a terrific write from your pen...
*~coco~*

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2002-03-14 12:47 PM

Sometimes my heart
seems to have a
mind of it's own.

James - it sure does! The heart hears all, sees all and feels all. That's why sometimes it breaks. Enjoyed this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2002-03-14 02:30 PM

yes it is funny how the heart rules...even when you dont want it too...hugss very sweet james..

~Victoria

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

13 posted 2002-03-14 02:40 PM

James, this is one of your best. Just excellent!

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

14 posted 2002-03-14 02:46 PM

James, a wonderful write!

((James))
-newell

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