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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Stormy Choreography ~*Marge Tindal*~ Maelstrom of the ebon 'If I am - I am', said she Vortex of versed-thought eddying back to me Across night sky it reigned sheeted in torrential cacophony For lightning has danced the thunder in stormy choreography 'If I'm not .... I'm not' *Inspired by a mid-of-night e-mail with Vicky as a March thunderstorm advanced* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the visuals are stunning  great write Marge!! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I will never look at an electric storm in the same way, after this stunning poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
What a wonderful poem, the imagery that you have captured in such a short space in such wonderful langauge. Thank you for sharing this with us Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very cool write Ms. Marge. Sometimes the storms are beautiful...especially when the calm sets in after....Enjoyed immensley. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl sweet sister of my heart this is truly awesome, the imagery that you’ve captured in such a short write is amazing. Naturally you’ve always painted masterpieces, this is stunning and vivid in it’s intensity. Utterly utterly wonderful writing.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge I wish her storm would find its way here. You capture a wonderful feeling with this one, not just of understanding a storm but a friend. Hugs! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ The night was alive with the dance~ Kind of figured you'd enjoy this~ BettyLou~ Awwww ! It was PURTY ! But had to shut down the computer until it rumbled through~ Andrew~ I thank you very much~ GentleSpirit~ Ahhhhh ... the calm A write in itself~ MarshaLove~ The storm wrote the piece, I just followed the dancing ink~ MartieSis~ Was a Florida storm ... but you have the Cherokee Chant to conjure up your own !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Vividy done. And thanks for working with Doctor Love on my cure. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Marge, breath taking. floria Floria |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
beautiful words, i enjoyed it. thanks. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Very pleased to know you enjoyed it ... and equally pleased to have assisted Dr.Love in the 'cure'~  Floria~ Thanks sweet friend~ GOlDsparklESS ~ Thanks so very much for the read and reply~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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