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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-03-13 11:59 PM



Stormy Choreography

~*Marge Tindal*~

Maelstrom of the ebon
'If I am - I am', said she
Vortex of versed-thought
eddying back to me

Across night sky it reigned
sheeted in torrential cacophony
For lightning has danced the thunder
in stormy choreography

'If I'm not .... I'm not'


*Inspired by a mid-of-night e-mail with Vicky
as a March thunderstorm advanced*

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2002-03-14 12:03 PM


the visuals are stunning
great write Marge!!

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2 posted 2002-03-14 12:57 PM


Marge:  I will never look at an electric storm in the same way, after this stunning poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2002-03-14 05:38 AM


What a wonderful poem, the imagery that you have captured in such a short space in such wonderful langauge. Thank you for sharing this with us

Andrew

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4 posted 2002-03-14 06:29 AM


very cool write Ms. Marge.  Sometimes the storms are beautiful...especially when the calm sets in after....Enjoyed immensley.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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5 posted 2002-03-14 09:46 AM


Margie girl sweet sister of my heart this is truly awesome, the imagery that you’ve captured in such a short write is amazing. Naturally you’ve always painted masterpieces, this is stunning and vivid in it’s intensity. Utterly utterly wonderful writing.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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6 posted 2002-03-14 10:27 AM


Marge

I wish her storm would find its way here.  You capture a wonderful feeling with this one, not just of understanding a storm but a friend.  Hugs!

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SEA~
The night was alive with the dance~
Kind of figured you'd enjoy this~

BettyLou~
Awwww !  It was PURTY !
But had to shut down the computer until it rumbled through~

Andrew~
I thank you very much~

GentleSpirit~
Ahhhhh ... the calm
A write in itself~

MarshaLove~
The storm wrote the piece,
I just followed the dancing ink~

MartieSis~
Was a Florida storm ...
but you have the Cherokee Chant to conjure up your own !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2002-03-14 03:49 PM


Vividy done. And thanks for working with Doctor Love on my cure.
Sandra

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9 posted 2002-03-14 06:09 PM


Very nice Marge, breath taking. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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10 posted 2002-03-14 06:50 PM


beautiful words, i enjoyed it. thanks.
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CatalinaMoon~
Very pleased to know you enjoyed it ...
and equally pleased to have assisted Dr.Love in the 'cure'~

Floria~
Thanks sweet friend~

GOlDsparklESS ~
Thanks so very much for the read and reply~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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