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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-03-13 11:26 PM

If Your Love Is Real
By: Noah Eaton
3/13/02

Lying awake late, alone again tonight
Beckoning for some hope to comfort me at twilight
All this nervous energy inside of me as I wait for your appeal
Yearning to know if your love is real

Here I lie, no one wants to take me to the Prom
I yearn for the summer to come, yearning to meet you for so long
Can your love change this way I feel?
As I'm wondering if your love is real

Talk to me
I need your love to help me sleep
Say it again to me
But please don't leave me

The snows falling, I cry for the spring
In my heart I hold this song I would kill to sing
You've got me head over heels
I dream to know if your love is real

I swear I can climb these mountains here
You freckle my skin with joy that I revere
I need you, my love, here I'm standing still
Wondering if your love is real

Talk to me
I need your love to help me sleep
Say it again to me
But please don't leave me

When I imagine the summer I always cry
Dreaming that I can lie right by your side
I need you, my love, I hope you love me just as much as I love you
Tell me you love me, prove to me your love is true

Talk to me
I need your love to help me sleep
Say it again to me
But please don't leave me
Or am I just a fool...
Am I just a fool...
Am I a fool...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-13-2002 11:27 PM).]

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-03-13 11:30 PM

Bittersweet Noah dear...hugs...

~Vic

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

2 posted 2002-03-13 11:35 PM

Noah - I hope it is true for you, but you certainly are not a fool. I should know, because I am one myself.

Dave

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2002-03-13 11:37 PM

Noah,

I have to agree with Dave, you are definately no fool. Hugs to you, we all have these feelings and thoughts at one time or another.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

4 posted 2002-03-14 04:25 AM

You ask some good questions. I have no idea. I have to look up prom in the dictionary. No much help.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-03-14 05:03 AM

I think that love requires a certain amount of faith and trust...and time will tell the story...James

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-03-14 09:57 AM

Noah darling boy absolutely first class writing, I love this ‘tis utterly excellent when you write you really do Write. Are you a fool? I’m sure you’re not I’ve watched the love between you grow, watched it blossom and flower, I think the two of you will be happy. Very very happy.

We all have these feelings at one time or another darling boy, we all wonder if what we have will last, is it destined for this or for that. Only time will tell enjoy each and every moment with your love darling boy, nothing can bring that moment in time back. Measure your time with love, and you will shine, I know it I

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-03-14 10:08 AM

liked it a lot

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2002-03-14 04:34 PM

Noah a very excellent poem, and if you are really going to the prom yourself I bet you are going to have a ball! My girlfriend did when we graduated and I think she had more fun than anyone there.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

9 posted 2002-03-14 04:44 PM

Wow *hugs* this is a beautiful poem Noah, I believe that in the end there is someone for everyone and that sometimes we just got to hang around patiently for the right one for us. Hope you have fun at your prom and thank you for the wonderful read

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-03-14 05:59 PM

Hi Noah, this is a beautiful yearning poem. Much feeling, great work here as you express yourself beautifully. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

11 posted 2002-03-14 06:05 PM

Noah....and it's not even April yet. (The film and song..."April Love".....Pat Boone and Shirley Jones...sigh. But you are too young to remember.) Anyway, thank you for sharing...and for reminding. Bob

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

12 posted 2002-03-14 07:27 PM

noah,

once again magic from your pen...
this was just so lovely. *sighs*!
utterly beautiful work!

take care.
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

13 posted 2002-03-15 02:27 PM

very nice work, it is so hard to trust love once you have been hurt by it....this is a wonderful way to write it

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

14 posted 2002-03-15 02:38 PM

Noah, your words never fail to touch the heart with their sweet sincerity. I hope that your love sees that she has such a beautiful heart who loves her dearly...

Here's hoping that all your wishes come true!

*hugs*
~Tier

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