Open Poetry #19 |
If Your Love Is Real |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
If Your Love Is Real By: Noah Eaton 3/13/02 Lying awake late, alone again tonight Beckoning for some hope to comfort me at twilight All this nervous energy inside of me as I wait for your appeal Yearning to know if your love is real Here I lie, no one wants to take me to the Prom I yearn for the summer to come, yearning to meet you for so long Can your love change this way I feel? As I'm wondering if your love is real Talk to me I need your love to help me sleep Say it again to me But please don't leave me The snows falling, I cry for the spring In my heart I hold this song I would kill to sing You've got me head over heels I dream to know if your love is real I swear I can climb these mountains here You freckle my skin with joy that I revere I need you, my love, here I'm standing still Wondering if your love is real Talk to me I need your love to help me sleep Say it again to me But please don't leave me When I imagine the summer I always cry Dreaming that I can lie right by your side I need you, my love, I hope you love me just as much as I love you Tell me you love me, prove to me your love is true Talk to me I need your love to help me sleep Say it again to me But please don't leave me Or am I just a fool... Am I just a fool... Am I a fool... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-13-2002 11:27 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Bittersweet Noah dear...hugs... ~Vic |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - I hope it is true for you, but you certainly are not a fool. I should know, because I am one myself. Dave |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, I have to agree with Dave, you are definately no fool. Hugs to you, we all have these feelings and thoughts at one time or another. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
You ask some good questions. I have no idea. I have to look up prom in the dictionary. No much help. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think that love requires a certain amount of faith and trust...and time will tell the story...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy absolutely first class writing, I love this ‘tis utterly excellent when you write you really do Write. Are you a fool? I’m sure you’re not I’ve watched the love between you grow, watched it blossom and flower, I think the two of you will be happy. Very very happy. We all have these feelings at one time or another darling boy, we all wonder if what we have will last, is it destined for this or for that. Only time will tell enjoy each and every moment with your love darling boy, nothing can bring that moment in time back. Measure your time with love, and you will shine, I know it I Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Noah a very excellent poem, and if you are really going to the prom yourself I bet you are going to have a ball! My girlfriend did when we graduated and I think she had more fun than anyone there. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow *hugs* this is a beautiful poem Noah, I believe that in the end there is someone for everyone and that sometimes we just got to hang around patiently for the right one for us. Hope you have fun at your prom and thank you for the wonderful read Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hi Noah, this is a beautiful yearning poem. Much feeling, great work here as you express yourself beautifully. floria Floria |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Noah....and it's not even April yet. (The film and song..."April Love".....Pat Boone and Shirley Jones...sigh. But you are too young to remember.) Anyway, thank you for sharing...and for reminding. Bob |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
noah, once again magic from your pen... this was just so lovely. *sighs*! utterly beautiful work! take care. amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very nice work, it is so hard to trust love once you have been hurt by it....this is a wonderful way to write it |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Noah, your words never fail to touch the heart with their sweet sincerity. I hope that your love sees that she has such a beautiful heart who loves her dearly... Here's hoping that all your wishes come true! *hugs* ~Tier |
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