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Word Sculpture |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Here Without you How could you know? How could I share? How foolish to think such thoughts or have such hopes so high Such poor company, such a fall to see the earth on impact The closing door, the endlessly slamming door These thoughts remain a haunting thing Except that I have loved you deeply Such anguish only that you are not here So pale beside the sparkling eyes I still remember How foolish to think such thoughts or have such hopes so high How could you know? How could I share? Without you Here Copyright Kkh 3/13/02 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-13-2002 09:51 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely format...and very true words...takes two for a conversation! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautful words and the format is quite fitting  Enjoyed very very much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (03-13-2002 10:06 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent...and such powerful feelings within the poem.. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
This Diamond...What beautiful expression in this poem. Though the subject matter is about the pain of lost love...the poem itself is a thing of beauty. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and the loss of love in these words but this is a gorgeous poem that resembles the shining star you are to us all! (kiss on cheek) bWe all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upo you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It is a true artistic creation when words form the image....very nicely done, miss  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Many thanks everyone. A pleasure to receive your help and support. ThisDiamond |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ Just perfect 'sculpting'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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