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the madness the frustration
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the madness the frustration |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
most of the poems that i write ryme, i don't write like this because it kinda freeks me out. well i hope you like it the madness the frustration that grips and stops time a few words and then overflowing emotions killing and hiding the real personality inside a deep labyrinth of false truths and half lies with an inescapable sense of forsakenness and depression hanging over head baring a constant hidden reminder of the past bring pain and morbid ness horribly mutilating and scaring the inward body and soul bring on pain of no source and no cure finding moments of balance with only physical pain and coming to the conclusion of only one way out living in a world where they think they understand and being pumped full of chemicals that totally hides it all making the feeling of depression intensify but hidden under this mask spending hours in the dark inner mind and with the decision made and keep a twisted path in order with depression becoming a constant relapse adding a new level to the labyrinth every time finding moments of balance with only physical pain and coming to the conclusion of only one way out The madness, The frustration...THE END Thank you for your time |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Matt, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope now you have found comfort and peace within yourself and love fills you! We all love you so much, my thoughts go out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I think this is one of the best ways to write. Don't be afraid to let it all out.  Then you can go back over and perhaps find things you never realized that you'd supressed. I enjoyed this. "For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
As Temptress and Noah said, let these feelings come up from the deep, and set yourself free. A well written piece. I wouldn't worry about format, rhythm or rhyme. Life itself doesn't usually rhyme, and sometimes it doesn't make much sense either. Keep that pen moving. |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
thank you for your replies i really look forword to what you say for it is my biggest feeling of happyness that i get and well i do like this form it's just it freeks me out and people think i'm going to kill myself when they read them but you all of you wouldn't do that and i thank you all. ~and about the ryming it just comes to me that way it's when i think aobut is when i write like this agian thank you all  ~Thank you for your time |
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