Open Poetry #19 |
K! Long Live Queen K! |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
K! Long Live Queen K! I am most assuredly one of those who reign A scepter in this hand, and nothing’s quite the same For even if I am careful, I’ll surely get a bop For this thing I’m wielding, shall surely hit my top! I am very splendidly a being of admire When I am so careful in my very fine attire Here’s a run in my stocking, from tip of toe on up! And a goodly chip has found it’s way onto my coffee cup! Just today I crowned my best, As life this morn was for my test! First I started at foot and leg, a bruising just to show I can glow in anything, from tippie top to toe! I collected bruises, just to know I’m here One upon my forearm, and one upon my rear! One found my thigh all right, another on my … chest, Today I crowned my everyplace, a queen quite at her best! I’m the Queen of Klutz, and my kingdom is my grace! I am quite the lucky one, I didn’t land upon my face! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of heart and keeper of dreams truth, I don’t believe you darling heart, never in a million years would you be the queen of klutz. This is just divine darling heart, the flow is excellent and the rhyme scheme perfect. As always excellent writing, do I love it? Yes I do. Utterly utterly love it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (03-12-2002 10:37 PM).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
If you're the Queen, then I'm one of the Royal Brats (Princesses) Thanks for the read, but I'm sorry that you're so... klutzy? I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee, I always thought I was such a klutz! Now after reading this you are quite welcome to the title. You seem much more deserving than I. Fun read Karilea...much enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhh...I would definitely be a prince of Klutz, I too can be quite clumsy sometimes! (smiles) You are so much fun to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karilea - Very amusing write. I used to be a klutz when I was a kid. I would constantly stub my toes. I really hated that. Even now, when I am on the computer, I will slip and my head will hit the monitor and I'll be knocked out cold for a few minutes.lol Dave |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey! That's my title...queen K... heh Actually - I'm clumsy too...Drinks take one look at me and fall over... hugs you K |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
NO WAY, QUEEN K! The most gracious lady among us must have had an off day. Your graciousness is unfailing. Methinks you tripped over your own perfection. Sorry about the bruises. Shenachie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeyQueenie~ I've a gallop in my stocking The finish line is 'nigh I've run from the 'Toe' snickering Here comes my well-bruised thigh~ Couldn't resist ! ! Been around the Klutz Track a time or two myself, Queenie~ *snickers* *chortles* n' *snorts* *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You tripping over your charm again are you? Geez Louise, how does one get a bruise on their chest anyway? I have been trying to recreate in my mind such a scenario and it fails me Well at least when you slipped on your wazoo, it sure brought out the humor in you The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Did I ever tell you the story of my trip down the stairs? Wear those bruises as a crown...you earned it! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Well I hope you are ok, if that is a recent fall....I sure didn't expect the poem to be about bruising...but a nice write despite hugssss M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I found many levels of fun in this one, Sunshine. Remember the phrase, "Let's go trippin" ??? Do we both take it literally as well as figuratively some days? Good humor...more tasty than a sweet ice cream treat. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
{GRINNING} |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I've fallen flat on my face a time or two, and on my rear once or twice. Ah well, nice to know I'm not alone! Well written and gave me a smile. Nan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea The humor in this is very refreshing to one who has fallen on top of a vase of flowers and shattered everything, including her thoughts of grace. Hugs! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
my I apply as Jester to this Queen?? For I have truly raised the level of "klutz" to a humor that none will ever see again. . . this got me laughing. . . really good. . . I needed this one today Sunshine. . . thanks. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Gee whiz Sunshine, You should have married my husband, then you guys could have been King and Queen of klutz....haha, good one. floria Floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And I DO NOT believe that YOU are HER... Enjoyed this...cute.... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunshine~ No way I take first honors in this....somedays I feel as though I need a pillow to ease the fall...LOL good write.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-14-2002 08:33 AM).] |
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