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River Of Dreams (inspired by Silver Steaks..."My River")
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River Of Dreams (inspired by Silver Steaks..."My River") |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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River Of Dreams Slowly it moves though meadows free savouring nature’s scent Weaving visions of what would be leaving the heart content As over stones of life it goes washing the pebbles clean Another dream it will compose of love that is unseen Around each bend it wends its way through fields and forests green Over falls with refreshing spray flows silent and serene Needing what my heart and soul craves, lost in fantasy themes I’ll float upon the warmth of waves in my river of dreams Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow this is such a beautiful peice of poetry, the imagery you have captured within is so wonderful, thank you for sharing this peice with us. Andrew  "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
So lovely karen..you just never know what that ole river has in store for you..hugss ~Victoria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen darling girl this is simply gorgeous, absolutely perfect. The flow of this river of words is a pure delight. Beautifully written, well done You know I love this don’t you? Of course you do now go and write something I can keep up with. This is beauty too rich and fair for everyday use. Absolutely perfect writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...just be sure to come out of the water sometimes. Life on dry land (reality) can be just as sweet |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Karen, This is beautiful..... Connie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen this is wonderful! Full of such vivid imagery. A real treat to read. Enjoyed thoroughly. Hugs, Nancy. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Startime...Another exquisite poem from you. Love the way you wend Nature and love together in a lovely tapestry of words. ***Ivy Rose |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Karen, this is just beautiful, as always. |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karen - This flows as beautifully as a river does. Nicely done. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This flows so gently and with great beauty. *S* Well done! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful inspiration. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Karen, your pen, is a quill writing with pure honey instead of ink. How could you know that my soul is craving to be sitting on the bank of your river, or on a raft slowly drifting down your lazy waters, staring at the trees, listening to the birds, just thinking of you. "Needing what my heart and soul craves, lost in fantasy themes I’ll float upon the warmth of waves in my river of dreams" How could you know, Karen? You have penned me a perfect day. Thank you. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karen I just love your words. love this; "As over stones of life it goes washing the pebbles clean" Such nice thoughts. floria Floria |
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