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Cry Baby
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Cry Baby |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Crybaby as I look at the blood shot eyes, i STARE and bitter tears role off the cheek, as a stifled sob Goes unheard again as a selfish heart cries IN DISGUST AT the ugliness brought out of me ME shown IN THE MIRROR for all to see. "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Andrew, this is so sad, never say that to yourself, you are a very loving friend and joy to us all and we all love you so much for who you are! (sigh) Always follow your heart and believe in yourself, sweet friend, you are all you need to be always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrew, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...the power of your feelings here touch me...My heart goes out to you in your pain...you know most often we are harder on ourselves than others are for we look into the mirror and see only what we can see which blinds us to the good in us...sometimes it is better to look at ourselves through anothers eyes....**big hugs**  Don't be too hard on yourself...Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
This brought on tears. It paints a very vivid picture. I like it. Continue on... "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh Sweetie... Love I don't know what to say... It breaks my heart when you feel this way... I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes when we feel this way..there are things we should change in our lives to make us a little happier with ourselves..easier said than done sometimes... ~Victoria |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh I just got the most interesting idea... I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The chaos of pain in a mirror glitter glass- Very well done. ThisDiamond |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Oh, wow.  Zu... I love it. I truely do. How dark, and deep. And so interesting. I love the bold message. (get it?) So interesting.... I can't do a deep response at the moment.... obviously. But know I loved it. I respect your talent. ~ Titus  Will I ever forget what happened today? |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is powerfully sad, but nicely written.  sky |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
andrew: this was an extremely powerful write...very emotional and melancholy. but that isn't necessarily a bad thing, sometimes we feel this way and i think it's best to write it out as you are. write on my friend! great job...just do yourself a favor, don't be so hard on yourself, as others here have said often times we are much harder on ourselves than the rest of the world. take care! amy  "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very intensive write, and I thought your presentation of the poem was excellent, the format was very effective. Thanks for sharing. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
Wow.. I haven't had a chance to read your work before but this really makes me want to read more of it... This was very well done... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Zu, it's ok if you cry.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrew~ Most effectively emoted and formatted ... however, As I look at your photo ... I STARE and *sigh* at how very handsome you are~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Aha...that is the very reason I shed very few tears.... well done! |
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