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A love letter to Marsha
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A love letter to Marsha |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
My heart beats Marsha … Marsha … Marsha My lips form I love you Marsha … Marsha … Marsha My arms ache To enfold you Marsha … Marsha … Marsha My lips hunger To taste yours Marsha … Marsha … Marsha And, still, My heart beats Marsha … Marsha … Marsha Inspired by: My Marsha fictional reply to a love letter…… or is it? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Interloper, my friend. I dearly love this. A tremendous response. And Marsha, darling girl has quite enough love for everyone of us at Passions. Boys and girls! And, of course you know, everyone knows, that I love her, too. She is wonderful!  ((Interloper)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
honey, you got the name wrong, it's S-U-S-A-N  like this a lot |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Newell~ Yes, I agree Susan ~ But, sweetheart, all my love letters to you are private ... well, most of 'em are Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
........shhhhhhh...... lol  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beatifully delightful, sweet friend, I just know Marsha is going to smile reading this! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you and Marsha are both wonderful friends to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this love letter will melt her heart, dear man....beautiful and filled with the very special kind of love you offer all the ladies here....You are truly a loving, passionate and compassionate man...I feel blessed to be able to read your poems....Thank you...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Interloper darling boy, oh my this is utterly utterly wonderful, your pen is perfectly poetical. I love I love it utterly utterly This is seriously excellent writing, the flow of this is perfect, the internal pace and the construction cannot be bettered You know I love this don’t you? Of course you do now go and write something I can keep up with. This is beauty too rich and fair for everyday use. Absolutely perfect writing You knew I’d have to reply to this didn’t you, it’s outstanding, truly outstanding writing I’d fill a hundred pages with the love I feel for you I’d write the words I love you in letters etched in fire Then I’d fill a few more pages with the tale of our desire Fire excite flames burning whenever you touch me Or write words of passion that flares so constantly But the thing that makes this special and so very true Are the trust and love that flow so tenderly from you I’d write the words of love spilling in rivers from my heart And promise faithfully that we’ll n'er be kept apart Each word of love is just a tiny piece there’s so much more And every word I write makes my soul take wing to soar Magic, wonder, awe anoint me with their touch Then add words of delight that I crave so very much But the thing that makes this special and so very true Are the trust and love that flow constantly from you To write words in a letter that speaks love loud and clear I’d fill a thousand pages telling you I hold you dear Engraved in words of gold etched deep within my soul The words that tell of love and how you made me whole Desire, passion, fire, they all play their various part But none of them can describe how much is in my heart But the thing that makes this special and so very true Are the trust and love that flow back from me to you Marsha   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (03-12-2002 05:54 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A beautiful poem to Marsha and an exquisite one back from her *s M |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bob hi there, NOW this is REAL POETRY, I like this a lot well written and beautiful in it’s melodic way. And I can see my mum loved it. And isn’t it typical of mum to write a long winded reply back? Yes, of course it is. Hey mum, my love letter is much better Well written Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh my, Marsha aren't you the popular one now. Well dear, we women love you too. I think this is a wonderful pouring of affection for our girl.Great work interloper. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marsha, Marsha, Marsha! It's always Marsha! LOL... Can you say Nancy? I'm just kidding!  This is wonderful as is her answer back to you in rhyme! ~Smiles and hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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