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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-03-11 07:17 PM


Would you like to come and fly
In my brightly colored balloon?
We could pass the world on by
As we drift up towards the moon

We'll cruise slowly towards the ocean
As the sun sinks below the sea
While you wrap your arms around me
A favourite place for me to be

We'll glide just like the birds
In our basket made for two
The world passing by below us
As we admire this stunning view

We'll land softly in the meadow
Upon a cushion of forest green
And on a rug we'll reminisce
About all the things we've seen

I'll lay out our picnic basket
Complete with champagne and caviar
We could stay like this forever
Until we spy the brightest star

I'll feed you grapes and strawberries
Until the cows come wandering home
Then we'll climb aboard our basket
And let the warm winds carry us home

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-11 07:22 PM


Sue...hey Sue!!!!   THIS IS AWESOME...and I
enjoy the flow of it too....

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2 posted 2002-03-11 07:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always weave the most romantic visions from your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Lovem
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-11 11:17 PM


loved it Susie Q...hugss...

          ~Vic

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